Gabriel9876
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The story will be in Romance, not sure if that is the right category.
There are 1,341 words so it is very short.
The story is about pleasing a woman to the best of a mans ability, driving her wild with passion. It is basically just the one scene in which the story exists.
I am looking for any constructive criticism on content, form, punctuation usage, anything really. Just be brutally honest with me about what you think!
I only hope to improve as a writer.
Gabriel9876
There are 1,341 words so it is very short.
The story is about pleasing a woman to the best of a mans ability, driving her wild with passion. It is basically just the one scene in which the story exists.
I am looking for any constructive criticism on content, form, punctuation usage, anything really. Just be brutally honest with me about what you think!
I only hope to improve as a writer.
Gabriel9876
