jsmiam
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I'm hoping someone might be in the mood for a quick-ish beta-reading/proof-reading. My story is complete, and although proofed many times by me, grammarly checked, etc, and reasonably well proofed within my abilities to spot my own mistakes, I know it still has plenty errors to go around.
It is 22k words, and is currently adult uncle and niece (30s and 40s), although it’s more of a voyeur/watching story, so I am very likely going to alter it into some kind on non incest forbidden fruit plot. (leaning toward adult male and the woman not that much older who was his baby sitter in the past). Or maybe I’ll get rid of a brother (one I don’t like and it’ll be his widow)
It's in Microsoft Word Online (anyone can edit, they don't even need MS word on their computer), but I can email it too. (I'm super careful about leaving traces on my computer, that's why it's in Word Online. If you're too good of an editor, you would probably want to use track changes and the like, but Word online doesn't play too well with that.
It's a story from a male perspective, who ends up with one then two then three girls, with lots of watching plus girl-girl spanking as a sub plot.
Based on past stories, it's likely (I hope) going to be a red H story. I know I get to speeding tickets from the grammar police. Maybe a good vetting will help
Thanks in advance. PM me. I'll try to reply quickly.
It is 22k words, and is currently adult uncle and niece (30s and 40s), although it’s more of a voyeur/watching story, so I am very likely going to alter it into some kind on non incest forbidden fruit plot. (leaning toward adult male and the woman not that much older who was his baby sitter in the past). Or maybe I’ll get rid of a brother (one I don’t like and it’ll be his widow)
It's in Microsoft Word Online (anyone can edit, they don't even need MS word on their computer), but I can email it too. (I'm super careful about leaving traces on my computer, that's why it's in Word Online. If you're too good of an editor, you would probably want to use track changes and the like, but Word online doesn't play too well with that.
It's a story from a male perspective, who ends up with one then two then three girls, with lots of watching plus girl-girl spanking as a sub plot.
Based on past stories, it's likely (I hope) going to be a red H story. I know I get to speeding tickets from the grammar police. Maybe a good vetting will help
Thanks in advance. PM me. I'll try to reply quickly.
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