Seeking an editor - Sci Fi & Fantasy - Endangered Ch 06

[ltpc]

Hi there,

I'm looking for an experienced editor to help me get my next chapter up to scratch. Just over 40k words.

This story is harem based, very fantasy heavy/unrealistic, set in a magical world.

I feel like I've got the actual proofing down pretty well but will accept any and all constructive criticism especially around flow, dialogue, improving writing style, and shortening my sentences. I'm known to abuse the shit out of the comma.

If you're unfamiliar with the story, I would appreciate you reading the previous chapters which is not a small ask given the length.

One final request is that you would be willing to work in MS word with Track Changes.

 

[_Lynn_]

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[ltpc]

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