Seeking an editor for an Erotic Couplings story.

[cunning5683]

The story is about 2700 words. It's about a guy watching porn on his tablet after work, a female coworker catches him and enjoys it too. They move to her car where they have sex. The story is mostly sex, not much tension or buildup.

I believe the grammar, spelling and punctuation are all ok, but the story itself feels amateurish to me. I'm hoping for improvements in story flow and dialogue. I have no background or experience in writing, but I was still hoping to post it on Literotica if possible.

If anyone is interested, I would appreciate any help offered. Thanks!

 

[HeyAll]

If you haven't found an editor yet, pm me.

 

[FurryFace]

If you're just looking for an editor, you've probably found him/her.

If you want to improve your writing, following the style of one of the better authors on here would be a good place to start. I recall seeing a thread entitled 'Recommend an Author' not so long ago. If I can find it again, I post the link here

 

[FurryFace]

Here it is

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1469836

 

[cunning5683]

Found someone

I found someone to look at the story and provide feedback. Thanks for the interest, feedback and link. I really appreciate it!