Seeking an editor - Exhibitionist & Voyeur Story

[beachlover1998]

Hi All -

I am seeking an editor primarily for flow, sentence structure and dialogue however open to character development and any general feedback as well.

My stories are based off of real life adventures. Here is a link to my first story:

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-night-at-the-beach-4

Thanks!