Second Story for all interested...

[NeoM_25]

Thanks to all who've read and voted on my first story--very appreciated folks...and very good votes, too...

My second one is up now--it's called Rumors and in the Erotic Couplings section. Very naughty, with a touch of irony in there for good measure.

Here's the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=58021


And as usual, all feedback--praiseworhty and just plain nasty--is welcome.

Thanks guys!

 

[NoJo]

Second story

I read your first paragraph, and decided it was going to be good.

Really liked, it, best Eric Stanton tradition (drunken lout gets what's he deserves).

You really took off like a Ferrari witht the first paragraph, and kept the pace up. Great stuff!

One quibble:

“Uggghhhhh…..oooohhhhhhhh…,” she uttered as she stopped stroking his cock and squeezed it hard. “Mmmmm….”

Can you guess the jarring word here? Is it "Uggghhhhh"? Noooo.... Is it "as"? No, but you're very close...

Do I detect a little Shift-F7 action?