School Sells Breeding Stock

[sirhugs]

I've had this half formed (half baked?) partial idea bouncing around in my brain for a while now and just have to let it out. Not likely I'd have time to write it anyhow, as it would need to be longish.

The basic concept is a remote nunnery (convent) which for centuries has been a school for the daughters of the elite, and secondarily a place where "bad girls" go to give birth.

with modern changes, the nunnery has fallen on hard times, so mother Superior casts about for new revenue streams. She then realizes that in the "orphanage" where the nuns raise the secret babies, they have a bunch of young women that grow to be fertile just as they graduate. Some have trust funds endowed by their secret parents, but some must rely on scholarships to colleges. some must just rely on the kindness of strangers.

Mother Superior wonders whether she could make money matching the latter group with rich infertile couples...

Of course, some of the couples decide not to go the in vitro route.

More work is needed to achieve plausibility I think.

Free to a good home.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

I've had this half formed (half baked?) partial idea bouncing arod in my brain for a while now and just have to let it out. Not likely I'd have time to write it anyhow, as it would need to be longish.

The basic concept is a remote nunnery (convent) which for centuries has been a school for the daughters of the elite, and secondarily a place where "bad girls" go to give birth.

with modern changes, the nunnery has fallen on hard times, so mother Superior casts about for new revenue streams. She then realizes that in the "orphanage" where the nuns raise the secret babies, they have a bunch of young women that grow to be fertile just as they graduate. Some have trust funds endowed by their secret parents, but some must rely on scholarships to colleges. some must just rely on the kindness of strangers.

Mother Superior wonders whether she could make money matching the latter group with rich infertile couples...

Of course, some of the couples decide not to go the in vitro route.

More work is needed to achieve plausibility I think.

Free to a good home.

I think your first issue is explaining why a woman who dedicated her life to God, and loves these girls as daughters suddenly starts whoring them out for cash.

 

[sunandshadow]

Seems like it would work better in any setting other than a modern one. Historical, fantasy, futuristic... anything else would be better.

 

[Sean Renaud]

While I agree with Sunandshadow I suspect if you got this out of the Industrial nations and into some third world shit hole you could make it work. I'm completely willing to believe that this kind of thing happens somewhere in South America. Still you'd spare yourself a lot of headaches by changing the setting.

I think your first issue is explaining why a woman who dedicated her life to God, and loves these girls as daughters suddenly starts whoring them out for cash.

Maybe she doesn't love them. Granted my knowledge of convents comes entirely from watching movies and reading stories but I always got the impression that this was there job and they did it because they had to. Why a woman of the cloth would EVER under any circumstances turn to prostitution is a bit beyond me but maybe she's not so much a true believer as again, this is a position of great respect in some communities.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Take it from someone who knows many nuns, and has gone on trips to Orphanages in Mexico...The nuns are fiercely protective of their charges. Being a nun is a calling, and the majority if these woman are loving compassionate and humble.

The nuns at The peace orphanage in Mexico, went years without shoes to make sure the kids got things they needed. Mother Theresa was not an exceptional nun, she just did what most nuns do everyday.

 

[Hypoxia]

Take it from someone who knows many nuns, and has gone on trips to Orphanages in Mexico...The nuns are fiercely protective of their charges. Being a nun is a calling, and the majority if these woman are loving compassionate and humble.

Indeed. Now, if the orphanage was run by an order of religious or lay brothers, THEN we might expect some profiteering. This would be a plot gerbil in a Dale Brown novel.

 

[callmeismael]

I think the key is that whatever happens, you need to have one really powerful and corrupt Mother Superior. Having her willing to do this for income and the good of her convent seems implausible. Having her do it because her own corruption and perversion makes for a better story, I think. And one person in power being corrupt in that way is far more plausible than a whole convent accepting it. How she goes about using her power to get her way.

Or you go the 'convent of hell' route and chalk it all up to demonic influence.
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[sirhugs]

I think your first issue is explaining why a woman who dedicated her life to God, and loves these girls as daughters suddenly starts whoring them out for cash.

like I said, it needs work...

but perhaps the key is that these gals are turning 18 & graduating with no money... so taking advantage of their fertility is doing them a favour (or so Mother superior rationalizes) AND the convent does need the money ...

I like that better than the evil Mother Superior...

 

[SteelPoint]

like I said, it needs work...

but perhaps the key is that these gals are turning 18 & graduating with no money... so taking advantage of their fertility is doing them a favour (or so Mother superior rationalizes) AND the convent does need the money ...

I like that better than the evil Mother Superior...

Go with it. I like it. Publish and be damned.

As if the clergy in various guises has never been complicit in dodgy dealing...

 

[sirhugs]

Go with it. I like it. Publish and be damned.

As if the clergy in various guises has never been complicit in dodgy dealing...

as I said in the OP, I do not have the time to work through the complexities...would love to read someone's take on it though.

 

[SteelPoint]

as I said in the OP, I do not have the time to work through the complexities...would love to read someone's take on it though.

Complexities? Surely it's simple: matins, lauds, prime, terce, panties, sex...

 

[i_would]

Another take on the basis of the idea.

Like in large parts of rural China, girls are not wanted and often aborted/dumped in favour of male offspring. So there are many girl orphans, and a surplus of young males looking for a bride (getting married is important - for a man to not have a wife is really bad, as without wife no children, and no (male) children means no progression of the family line). The current reality in China is, iirc, 118 male babies to every 100 female babies. In certain rural areas going towards 130 males for every 100 females. Parts of rural India face similar issues.

So an orphanage that has a large number of girls of maritable age (late teens, early 20s) would likely have interest of these young men.

Now up to you how to dress this up. As others pointed out, expect carers of orphans to be really protective. All in all it can give you a great basis for a story - erotic or not: orphange full of girls, quite some of which are over-18s (they live in the orphanage until they get married, when growing older they help taking care of the babies and younger children - not sure whether this is normal practice but at least it's plausible). Those young women of course have interest in men, and interest in getting married (and settle down, have babies, etc). And they are surrounded by a community with a surplus of young men, who have interest in women, not just for marriage - while these men also have a strong social pressure from their own family to find themselves a wife.

So you get those nice complications of nuns not allowing their girls to go out at night; boys that have to bring home a girlfriend, possibly resorting to renting a girlfriend for a day (again this happens in China - rent a boyfriend or girlfriend to take home for the holidays, I don't make this up), the process of selecting suitable men for the girls, etc.

And if that's not enough, add a (smaller) orphanage for boys (true orphans - lets disregard that most boys in orphanages in China have physical or mental defects), who are also desperate to get themselves a girl but don't stand a chance, as they're of even lower class than the farm boys, which already have to compete with, and often lose out to the richer city boys.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I think regardless of what may be true in reality the idea of "evil" nuns who just want these pains in the asses out of the Orphanage is well enough established in mainstream media right up there with horny Catholic schoolgirls, pedophile priests, hot headed Latinas and evil Russians that aside from that one nun who runs an orphanage and reads all my stories while telling me I'm a bad influence on her charges that you could skate right past that without anybody calling you on it.

 

[Hypoxia]

I think regardless of what may be true in reality the idea of "evil" nuns who just want these pains in the asses out of the Orphanage is well enough established in mainstream media right up there with horny Catholic schoolgirls, pedophile priests, hot headed Latinas and evil Russians that aside from that one nun who runs an orphanage and reads all my stories while telling me I'm a bad influence on her charges that you could skate right past that without anybody calling you on it.

Yeah, after all, this is sexual fantasyland here. Why let reality intrude on a hot story? (Not that I think evil nuns are hot.) But as I suggested before, evil priests or lay brothers would give the story a greater "ring of truth" than evil nuns. Unless they were TG nuns maybe. (Oops, am I maligning TGs here?) Hey, I know! They're Thai dickgirl (DG) nuns! Yeah, that solves everything!

 

[Sean Renaud]

More like, why let common beliefs invade fantasy. And while I said evil, I more meant mean, disciplinarian who don't like children for one reason or another. Hell, the idea that they are quite protective of these girls to one degree or another could be an important detail. There is some kind of vetting process that keeps the girls reasonably safe.

 

[romantic_perv]

This raises an interesting question for me, which I'm certain has been answered officially but I'm too lazy to look up: would the Church have as big of a problem, or even more, with in-vitro as opposed to a man with an infertile wife impregnating an 18 year old girl through intercourse? I know they teach that an infertile partner is legitimate ground for divorce, and really dislike in-vitro.

 

[loquere]

The story does seem wrong on many levels.

 

[Hypoxia]

The story does seem wrong on many levels.

And that is why it could be a big hit.

 

[sirhugs]

Sometimes ideas morph in the writing:

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-breeding-bitch

 

[Hypoxia]

I recently acquired a remaindered book, NAPOLEON'S PRIVATES: 2500 Years of History Unzipped, an account of salacious historical tidbits. The chapter SEX AND THE RENAISSANCE NUN is rather enlightening. Fifteenth-century Venetian doweries were huge; well-to-do but not super-rich families sent their excess daughters to convents that were essentially pleasure palaces or even active brothels (for poorer girls). Sex tourism flourished; Dutch and English gentlemen loved 'mingling' with the ladies. Thirty-three convents were eventually prosecuted for "sex crimes against God" (since the 'nuns' were technically married to Yeshua).

Father-confessors seem to have run the operations, not just in Venice but (implicitly) around northern Italy. Did these fellows "sell breeding stock"? The book sayeth not, but I wouldn't be surprised.

What IS surprising is that in a couple centuries of sacred Italian bed-hopping, just ONE case of lesbianism was recorded, with a Florentine abbess who apparently thought that angels had entered the bodies of her charges, yum. Well, "Sapphic love doesn't even get a passing mention as a sin in Dante's vision of hell", so maybe the male establishment didn't really care what women did amongst themselves.

 

[thekeenreader]

Wow, superbly interesting sruff there Hypoxia. Thanks

 

[Hypoxia]

Wow, superbly interesting sruff there Hypoxia. Thanks

Wonderful book, just US$6.98 new at Barnes & Noble. Lots of great stuff: the truth about chastity belts, castrati, impotence trials, stag films, celeb body parts, ancient STDs and condoms, J Edgar Hoover in drag, aphrodisiacs, et al. Highly recommended. NAPOLEON'S PRIVATES: 2500 Years of History Unzipped, by Tony Perrottet (MJF Books, New York, 2008).

 

[GrrlFriday]

I think this might work well as a hair fetish story, instead of a 'breeding stock' story.

The nuns belong to a school of thought that interprets "But if a woman have long hair, it is a glory to her: for her hair is given her for a covering." as meaning 'No haircuts for girls, ever.'

As a result, the women of the convent all have lovely, flowing, silky hair down to their ankles.
This in itself could cause problems - can you imagine a young woman of 18 confronting the boy who ALWAYS used to pull her pigtails?

In comes the New Management - perhaps a Father, who sees in the hair a quick cash opportunity (selling it for wigs) and a spiritual liability (vanity is evil and tarnishes the soul). Therefore, shaved heads for all adults at the convent. Not sure whether he'd be open about the cash opportunity or not - if he plans to use it to fix the stained glass window or what...

How do the girls react to the news? I'm thinking there has to be a Lady Godiva scene in there somewhere...