School outcast to school slut

[sassysasha89]

A beautiful stunning hot-bodied Latina bombshell is a good girl and perfect daughter for her single mother who had her at age 14 and teaches her to save herself for her husband, a man worthy of her body. But at school she was targeted for rumors, cruel taunts from the populars about being a slut due her extreme beauty: dark-skinned, beautiful ebony hair, green eyes and her sexy sensual voice laced with a Spanish accent.

The top stud of the populars makes a bet with the males to fuck her within three weekends/a month. He wooed the Latina and after three weeks of wooing, she gives up her virginity to him behind the bleachers in the gym or outside or in the locker room. Her first night he fucked her, she turned completely wanton. Once was not enough and she was more than late coming back home. A month later, he had her completely hooked on sex. When he wants her, she comes and spread her legs for him.

The Latina had her moralistic and logical side warn her that it was moving too fast and she made a mistake giving her virginity to him. But when he touches her and she sees his cock, her pussy moistens and the logical side disappears as she rides the cock. She was in for a complete shock when she learns that the whole thing was a bet and the stud won big money for fucking her. She was blackmailed into becoming their fuck-toy, the Latina came at their beck and call.

The Latina, who once had an honest relationship with her mother, was lying about who she was hanging out with and where she was going, etc. Her mother had no idea that her mother was .

How else can the popular studs use the Latina?

Possible novel/novella or story series.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... single mother who had her at age 14 ...

This will set alarm bells off at Literotica Censor Central.

I suggest that if you move that to 19 and mother had to drop out of college, then start the daughter at college as a virgin; you will avoid a lot of problems getting this posted. What authors do on this site is write the story exactly as they want it and then add 4 or 5 years to every mention of age, and change "school" to "college" throughout.

There are even some stories posted like that here and with the right age on other sites!

 

[sassysasha89]

This will set alarm bells off at Literotica Censor Central.

I suggest that if you move that to 19 and mother had to drop out of college, then start the daughter at college as a virgin; you will avoid a lot of problems getting this posted. What authors do on this site is write the story exactly as they want it and then add 4 or 5 years to every mention of age, and change "school" to "college" throughout.

There are even some stories posted like that here and with the right age on other sites!

I read some stories from authors like TheTalkMan. In his story "Foxy Grandma", the grandmother had her child at age 15 but it's still up.

What other sites are there?

Thanks though!

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

I read some stories from authors like TheTalkMan. In his story "Foxy Grandma", the grandmother had her child at age 15 but it's still up. ...

The author has trodden close to the "permitted" line but is very careful to make the boy 18 to stay within the rules.

... What other sites are there? ...

I can tell you if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[Atavist]

'Her mother gave birth while still a teen herself.'

Problem solved.

 

[PerilEyes]

This is a great idea. Hope it happens.

 

[lovecraft68]

This will set alarm bells off at Literotica Censor Central.

I suggest that if you move that to 19 and mother had to drop out of college, then start the daughter at college as a virgin; you will avoid a lot of problems getting this posted. What authors do on this site is write the story exactly as they want it and then add 4 or 5 years to every mention of age, and change "school" to "college" throughout.

There are even some stories posted like that here and with the right age on other sites!

Rephrase that to it should raise alarm bells here. At least technically.

Now in reality it could fly because the author is not describing the mother having sex at fourteen just that she had a kid at fourteen. It's like saying yeah back when I was 16 I owned a mustang. There is no under age sex there.

But of course with Lits extreme paranoia you are right that it may get the boot. But if it does it is luck of the draw.

And I'm tired of hearing how "high school" is a red flag. Just because you're not creative enough to make it work, does not mean everyone else is as well.

Know what? take notes I'm about to reveal a complicated trick here. Ready?

As Mr. Thompson droned on and on, I looked out the classroom window. Parked no more than twenty feet away, as if taunting me, was the red Toyota dad had given me for my 18th birthday."

Now there is a scene of a girl in High school that in those two sentences has declared that she is of age. Really difficult that was.

Now saying someone is a freshmen in HS of course is pure stupidity, but senior is fine and is easily done.

Maybe this is why you make a living off of finishing dead people's work. I am surprised however, you did not suggest the Latina being raped repeatedly as is your usual fantasy.

Tell you what when I die I'll let you look at some of my stories so you can see something original.

 

[lovecraft68]

I read some stories from authors like TheTalkMan. In his story "Foxy Grandma", the grandmother had her child at age 15 but it's still up.

What other sites are there?

Thanks though!

storiesonline is a good one. It allows for underage.

 

[stormy216]

Is rape & non-consent the same thing?I love the story idea,SassySasha89.

 

[sassysasha89]

Rephrase that to it should raise alarm bells here. At least technically.

Now in reality it could fly because the author is not describing the mother having sex at fourteen just that she had a kid at fourteen. It's like saying yeah back when I was 16 I owned a mustang. There is no under age sex there.

But of course with Lits extreme paranoia you are right that it may get the boot. But if it does it is luck of the draw.

And I'm tired of hearing how "high school" is a red flag. Just because you're not creative enough to make it work, does not mean everyone else is as well.

Know what? take notes I'm about to reveal a complicated trick here. Ready?

As Mr. Thompson droned on and on, I looked out the classroom window. Parked no more than twenty feet away, as if taunting me, was the red Toyota dad had given me for my 18th birthday."

Now there is a scene of a girl in High school that in those two sentences has declared that she is of age. Really difficult that was.

Now saying someone is a freshmen in HS of course is pure stupidity, but senior is fine and is easily done.

Maybe this is why you make a living off of finishing dead people's work. I am surprised however, you did not suggest the Latina being raped repeatedly as is your usual fantasy.

Tell you what when I die I'll let you look at some of my stories so you can see something original.

So your saying it's all about how you word it.

The repeatedly initial sex with the multiple popular jerks is part of her blackmail from.

 

[sassysasha89]

Is rape & non-consent the same thing?I love the story idea,SassySasha89.

Thanks. Think you know anyone who'd want to write it?

 

[lovecraft68]

Is rape & non-consent the same thing?I love the story idea,SassySasha89.

Yes rape and non consent are the same thing.

Literotica refuses to allow an author to use the word rape in a title or tag line.

They do this so they fly under the radar when people google rape stories. makes them look like they do not allow them.

They call it non consent instead. non consensual sex is rape.

 

[sassysasha89]

This is a great idea. Hope it happens.

You and me both. And by someone who really truly writes the idea with justice.

 

[CWatson]

This is a great idea. Hope it happens.

You and me both. And by someone who really truly writes the idea with justice.

Why not write it yourself? I gotta tell you, that's the only way you'll get the idea written with great justice.

I think your idea is interesting. I've written primarily for high-school characters (which is why the vast body of my work isn't published here) and I think I could do a decent job with these characters. I'd ditch the Latina angle, because I don't think it's necessary to get the point across and have never gotten the whole "exotic foreigner" thing to begin with. (Of course, I myself am a minority, which might explain that.) I would play up the back-and-forth as she wars between her socialized, moralistic, reputation-minded side and her selfish, impulsive, pleasure-seeking side (the "virgin-whore dichotomy," as it's sometimes called). She would not do a whole lot of sexually-adventurous things, because that's not how I roll. I would focus more attention on her relationship with her mother--her mother's pride in her upstanding daughter; her disappointment and confusion at her recent choices; her mother's fear that her daughter would make the same mistakes her mother did (like the ones that led to her becoming a teenage single mother). And there'd probably be a love story in there somewhere, because I tend to write those.

Does this sound like an interesting story? My professional pride leads me to hope that it does. But does it sound like your story? No, it probably doesn't. And, well, that's kind of the thing. No one can write your story. No one but you. Nobody knows what your kinks are, what fears you want to express, what themes you want to hit. People talk about how this or that is "my life's story", but I think that's a gross simplification; every story they write is their life's story--is a product of the life they have lived. It might not be about them, but it is of them.

The thing about writing is that it's not like being a short-order cook or even a tailor, whipping up things to specification and not adding any personal touches. A story is projected through the writer--their heart, their soul, their personality--and the end product is inevitably colored by that fact. I wanted to do an experiment a few years ago where I provided the basic plot, but I and a bunch of others got to each write our own version of the story, including its ending. I guarantee you that no two stories would have had more than the grossest, most basic similarities--because the story would have had different authors, and each author would put their stamp on their version of the story.

They say, "If you want something done right, you've gotta do it yourself." In many other fields, this is a recommendation... But in writing and the other fields of self-expression, it's a law of nature, as immutable as gravity. If you want it done right, you must do it because nobody else can do it right. No one else can write it the way you would.

So why not write it yourself?

 

[sassysasha89]

Why not write it yourself? I gotta tell you, that's the only way you'll get the idea written with great justice.

I think your idea is interesting. I've written primarily for high-school characters (which is why the vast body of my work isn't published here) and I think I could do a decent job with these characters. I'd ditch the Latina angle, because I don't think it's necessary to get the point across and have never gotten the whole "exotic foreigner" thing to begin with. (Of course, I myself am a minority, which might explain that.) I would play up the back-and-forth as she wars between her socialized, moralistic, reputation-minded side and her selfish, impulsive, pleasure-seeking side (the "virgin-whore dichotomy," as it's sometimes called). She would not do a whole lot of sexually-adventurous things, because that's not how I roll. I would focus more attention on her relationship with her mother--her mother's pride in her upstanding daughter; her disappointment and confusion at her recent choices; her mother's fear that her daughter would make the same mistakes her mother did (like the ones that led to her becoming a teenage single mother). And there'd probably be a love story in there somewhere, because I tend to write those.

Does this sound like an interesting story? My professional pride leads me to hope that it does. But does it sound like your story? No, it probably doesn't. And, well, that's kind of the thing. No one can write your story. No one but you. Nobody knows what your kinks are, what fears you want to express, what themes you want to hit. People talk about how this or that is "my life's story", but I think that's a gross simplification; every story they write is their life's story--is a product of the life they have lived. It might not be about them, but it is of them.

The thing about writing is that it's not like being a short-order cook or even a tailor, whipping up things to specification and not adding any personal touches. A story is projected through the writer--their heart, their soul, their personality--and the end product is inevitably colored by that fact. I wanted to do an experiment a few years ago where I provided the basic plot, but I and a bunch of others got to each write our own version of the story, including its ending. I guarantee you that no two stories would have had more than the grossest, most basic similarities--because the story would have had different authors, and each author would put their stamp on their version of the story.

They say, "If you want something done right, you've gotta do it yourself." In many other fields, this is a recommendation... But in writing and the other fields of self-expression, it's a law of nature, as immutable as gravity. If you want it done right, you must do it because nobody else can do it right. No one else can write it the way you would.

So why not write it yourself?

The problem with me is that I need help getting started. I would love to write it and see how my writing fares out. But I need help.

I like the idea of playing up with the mother-daughter relationship because in my mind, how her mother had was also crucial. In my head, she's all tied up with her father who started out good when the Latina was younger but she basically remembers him as a no-show who pops up occasionally with promises that he'll do better and her mother takes him back into the house and in their bed. But the father is stepping out on her mother with other women. When the mother and father were younger, they were extremely sexually active and the father monogamous to her wife.

Feel more than free to write up your personal take on the story. I'd be interested in seeing how it'd look.