School mascot

[loquere]

So the story takes place in a college lets say indiana.

A nerd or average kid is encouraged by his father who went to the college to be the mascot. He dosen't understand why his dad is pushing him in this direction but does it anyway.

Unknown to him there is an unoficial colleg tradition few no about, the school mascot who dresses up in a grzzly suit has sex with the head cheeleader the night and morning before everygame.

It dosen't matter who the mascot is. It's a superstitouse tradition. So the protagonist goes for it and gets the position.

Huh? What do you all think?

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Yawn.

 

[loquere]

Yawn.

Someone else?

 

[TxRad]

Someone else?

Write it and they will come. Pun intended.

 

[sr71plt]

It looks like it might be a fresh plotline (or one not used often). See how you can push it to make more of a story of it, write it up, and then find an editor for it, because your English is pretty dreadful.

 

[TE999]

How 'bout if the dude is related to the head cheerleader by blood and only finds out about 'the tradition' after he assumes the mascots duties? You can't break tradition, y'know. His Dad knew all along of course. Muhahaha!

 

[Stella_Omega]

How about if the grizzly bear suit infuses the wearer with the Spiiiiriiiit offff the griiiizlyyy bbbeeeaaar and the sex is better than he could ever have done by himself... Or maybe he just thinks so... and when he loses the mascot post, he has to figure out how to fuck like a human.

 

[loquere]

How about if the grizzly bear suit infuses the wearer with the Spiiiiriiiit offff the griiiizlyyy bbbeeeaaar and the sex is better than he could ever have done by himself... Or maybe he just thinks so... and when he loses the mascot post, he has to figure out how to fuck like a human.

Reading the first few words, I was like 'BITCH PLEASE," but after finishing the whole thing I like the idea. I only had the idea writing it will take awhile(months upon months). I've never worked with another author but thats the only way this will get done soon.

 

[lovecraft68]

So the story takes place in a college lets say indiana.

A nerd or average kid is encouraged by his father who went to the college to be the mascot. He dosen't understand why his dad is pushing him in this direction but does it anyway.

Unknown to him there is an unoficial colleg tradition few no about, the school mascot who dresses up in a grzzly suit has sex with the head cheeleader the night and morning before everygame.

It dosen't matter who the mascot is. It's a superstitouse tradition. So the protagonist goes for it and gets the position.

Huh? What do you all think?

Post this in the story ideas section you may get more responses.

Personally, I don't see much appeal here. I think it would only bearly hold my interest.

Also, spell check is your friend, your spelling is unbearable

Okay, sorry, I'll stop now.

 

[PennLady]

This would definitely not interest me, but I was curious -- what about the cheerleader? What if she doesn't want to have sex? Or not with anyone who isn't her boyfriend? Or girlfriend? And is the head cheerleader a boy or a girl? Let's go with she by default, but she has to be told about this as well by someone.

 

[loquere]

Post this in the story ideas section you may get more responses.

Personally, I don't see much appeal here. I think it would only bearly hold my interest.

Also, spell check is your friend, your spelling is unbearable

Okay, sorry, I'll stop now.

I usually do not check anything prior to posting. I'll see what I can do, your right.

Thanks for the directional advice about where to post.

A story like this will have to be a multi layered piece.

It can’t just be guy puts on suit and gets blowjob, football team wins, Bush gets third term.

I can tie it into an old idea. The head cheerleader doesn’t believe in the (mascot fucking) tradition and refuses to fuck the mascot, she later resolves to giving him a hand job after massive losses, the team wins after the hand job. On the other side her quarterback BF places a bet on his games, but he losses and can't pay up. When he tries to pay up using the girlfriend as a sex trade, she gets pissed and revenge fucks the mascot.

Quarterback gets the shit beaten out of him for not paying up. the second string QB takes over and wins all the games, due to the cheerleader finally thoroughly fucking the mascot.

 

[Handley_Page]

This would definitely not interest me, but I was curious -- what about the cheerleader? What if she doesn't want to have sex? Or not with anyone who isn't her boyfriend? Or girlfriend? And is the head cheerleader a boy or a girl? Let's go with she by default, but she has to be told about this as well by someone.

As a side issue:
A "Cheerleader"; a post previously held by a pretty and fit girl, may now be a boy ?
I realise we live in strange times, but 'strewth !

 

[sr71plt]

As a side issue:
A "Cheerleader"; a post previously held by a pretty and fit girl, may now be a boy ?

Why, yes, yes, it could be (at my university, it was until they started admitting women in the early 70s). And that would make for an interesting story, too.

 

[PennLady]

As a side issue:
A "Cheerleader"; a post previously held by a pretty and fit girl, may now be a boy ?
I realise we live in strange times, but 'strewth !

I don't know the stats, but there certainly are men in cheerleading. My college didn't have a big squad, but I recall a couple of guys on it. So I'd say most likely, it'd be a girl, but it could be a guy.

 

[TinyBeth]

We had what they called a "Stunt Team" when I was in HS. It was essentially a male cheerleading squad. They did routines with the cheerleaders. But my school was fairly progressive on gender politics. We also had a girl on the Wrestling team.
A male cheerleader would be an interesting twist on the old cliche.

 

[lovecraft68]

I don't know the stats, but there certainly are men in cheerleading. My college didn't have a big squad, but I recall a couple of guys on it. So I'd say most likely, it'd be a girl, but it could be a guy.

They had a couple of male cheerleaders in my high school.

I was appalled when my girlfriend tried to get me to join.

Shit, I was too manly for that.

I took modern dance instead. Showed them.

 

[loquere]

So I here people like romance. I think the term romance is relative.

 

[sr71plt]

I think the term romance is relative.

So you must be another one of those incest people.

 

[lovecraft68]

So you must be another one of those incest people.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bcYppAs6ZdI&feature=fvwrel

 

[TE999]

How about making the mascot and the head cheerleader female; one's bi-curious and the other's straight. Where's tradition then, huh?

 

[loquere]

How about making the mascot and the head cheerleader female; one's bi-curious and the other's straight. Where's tradition then, huh?

That's actually hot.

On the note of incest I just finished a borderline incest piece.

But I do want to write something extreme. Gay, trans, Lesbian, straight deep incest. Something nontraditional.

 

[lovecraft68]

That's actually hot.

On the note of incest I just finished a borderline incest piece.

But I do want to write something extreme. Gay, trans, Lesbian, straight deep incest. Something nontraditional.

I have to ask, what's a "borderline" incest piece. They "steps" or did something almost happen?

And here's some deep incest with a fun tradition all its own behind it.

http://www.literotica.com/s/moms-christmas-tradition

 

[loquere]

I have to ask, what's a "borderline" incest piece. They "steps" or did something almost happen?

And here's some deep incest with a fun tradition all its own behind it.

http://www.literotica.com/s/moms-christmas-tradition

I can send it to you, although it's still in the final process of editing. It's something to think about because I was planning on putting it into erotic coupling instead of incest. I was also planning on turning it into a scifi vampire story later.

Do you want me to email it to you, or do you want me to try and explain it?

 

[fifty5]

So the story takes place in a college lets say indiana.

A nerd or average kid is encouraged by his father who went to the college to be the mascot. He dosen't understand why his dad is pushing him in this direction but does it anyway.

Unknown to him there is an unoficial colleg tradition few no about, the school mascot who dresses up in a grzzly suit has sex with the head cheeleader the night and morning before everygame.

It dosen't matter who the mascot is. It's a superstitouse tradition. So the protagonist goes for it and gets the position.

Huh? What do you all think?

Leaving the spelling issue aside, most story lines suck when shrunk as far as your summary (try reducing a Shakespeare play to 9 lines). The question is how the story is written in full.

How interesting can you make the build-up?

How well are the characters explored (NO, the writing, not the sex), e.g. what is the cheerleader's attitude to the tradition - before/after each fuck, and the game?

How erotically is the sex described?

Is there a plot line, with twists, to extend this from just one fuck? Or, given, "night and morning," what changes between the two? - to repeat what others have posted, what about the cheerleader's BF/GF, what's the significance of the bear suit, what effect does (not) following the tradition have on game results (and how - a superstitious explanation will turn off some readers, but if you can think of a rational explanation (I can't, off hand) everyone can go with it).

This could be the seed of a great story ... or a big yawn.

It all comes down to how well you write it.

IMHO

 

[loquere]

Leaving the spelling issue aside, most story lines suck when shrunk as far as your summary (try reducing a Shakespeare play to 9 lines). The question is how the story is written in full.

How interesting can you make the build-up?

How well are the characters explored (NO, the writing, not the sex), e.g. what is the cheerleader's attitude to the tradition - before/after each fuck, and the game?

How erotically is the sex described?

Is there a plot line, with twists, to extend this from just one fuck? Or, given, "night and morning," what changes between the two? - to repeat what others have posted, what about the cheerleader's BF/GF, what's the significance of the bear suit, what effect does (not) following the tradition have on game results (and how - a superstitious explanation will turn off some readers, but if you can think of a rational explanation (I can't, off hand) everyone can go with it).

This could be the seed of a great story ... or a big yawn.

It all comes down to how well you write it.

IMHO

LOL! I say we form a special committee to investigate the need for spelling perfection, on an informal forum environment.

I've pretty much forgotten about this story. Any intention to start or finish it is dead.


Like anything else it will need a good craftsman/woman to make it work. I did say I would work with someone on it, but that was before.