Scene assist, ladies?

[voluptuary_manque]

My protagonist, Carly, has been persuaded by her domme, Edith, to lay her first train. The train will consist of Edith with strap-on, Carly's husband Ronald and Edith's husband Alfie. Carly is currently stretched out naked on the dining room table where Edith is bedecking her body with enough cold cuts, cheese and salad greens to feed the four of them.

Now my question . . .

Regarding the thoughts running through Carly's head: Which is the more delicious image? Is she the quarry, run down by the pack and about to satisfy their relentless appetites or is she about to be 'sacrificed' to the gods of fertility and fecundity?

On the latter note, Carly has told Ronald to go bareback tonight. Their first-born will be three when the next is born if she gets pregnant in the next couple of months. Carly was an only child and she wants a large family. Or might there be an idea I haven't thought of?

Opinions, please?

 

[Lisa Summers]

Opinions, please?

Go with the mayo over spicy brown mustard.

 

[Guest]

That's a lot to cram into one scene, yes? Impregnation and all?

My first thought about what you posted was, eat the cold cuts, then have sex. I can't see them as part of the same scene.

I think she's quarry, yes. But the food spoils the scene for me.

Or maybe more dessert type things - creams and honey and sticky yummy drippy liquids.

Mmmmm.

 

[Stella_Omega]

She's already stretched out on the table, so there's no question of being "run down." That part already happened, more or less. I would say she's "waiting to be sacrificed."

Impatiently waiting!

 

[voluptuary_manque]

She's already stretched out on the table, so there's no question of being "run down." That part already happened, more or less. I would say she's "waiting to be sacrificed."

Impatiently waiting!

"Trembling with excitement" impatient.

Thanx, the scene is supposed to be from her viewpoint and I'm trying to get the emotional impact right. It's going to be a long scene . . .

 

[_Lynn_]

"Trembling with excitement" impatient.

Thanx, the scene is supposed to be from her viewpoint and I'm trying to get the emotional impact right. It's going to be a long scene . . .

*tiptoeing in, gasping, and running out*

 

[lance gt]

Here's a thought Bear. As this is her first train, why not substitute the food for toys, like plugs and vibes and such, placed around her. She is submitted to the event already, it's how her initiation should take place and how the scene unfolds to her, that needs the description of her feelings.

She would be going through quite a lot of unsettled thoughts of her sexuality, her impending birth of the child she is carrying, her subservience to everyone. Quite the conflict.

 

[voluptuary_manque]

Here's a thought Bear. As this is her first train, why not substitute the food for toys, like plugs and vibes and such, placed around her. She is submitted to the event already, it's how her initiation should take place and how the scene unfolds to her, that needs the description of her feelings.

She would be going through quite a lot of unsettled thoughts of her sexuality, her impending birth of the child she is carrying, her subservience to everyone. Quite the conflict.

You would have to know the background to understand. Lynn does because she's editing the forerunner and Stella does because she helped me with it. This isn't Carly's initiation to group sex. All four of them belong to a large, discrete polyamorous community. Though Carly has had lots of sex with lots of men (and a fair number of women) she's never deliberately done this particular thing before. Came close back when she was initiated, but not quite.

 

[lance gt]

You would have to know the background to understand. Lynn does because she's editing the forerunner and Stella does because she helped me with it. This isn't Carly's initiation to group sex. All four of them belong to a large, discrete polyamorous community. Though Carly has had lots of sex with lots of men (and a fair number of women) she's never deliberately done this particular thing before. Came close back when she was initiated, but not quite.

I understand, although Sarah is right about the food. Layering her in sensual edibles would be nice, injecting her with safe treats for all to lick and suck out of her might be more enjoyable. Is she a smorgasbord or a dessert tray?

 

[voluptuary_manque]

I understand, although Sarah is right about the food. Layering her in sensual edibles would be nice, injecting her with safe treats for all to lick and suck out of her might be more enjoyable. Is she a smorgasbord or a dessert tray?

Antipasto. The goodies all come from a trattoria near their main gathering place named Danielli's. That ensures that she's well olive-oiled and slippery.

 

[lance gt]

Antipasto. The goodies all come from a trattoria near their main gathering place named Danielli's. That ensures that she's well olive-oiled and slippery.

Maybe after dinner, she can be a big Cannoli.Forget the gun, grab the cannolis

 

[O2]

Virgin olive oil?

 

[Guest]

Virgin olive oil?

Not any more.

 

[voluptuary_manque]

Virgin olive oil?

Rather not. Their son is about 27 months old. So's the poodle.

 

[O2]

Rather not. Their son is about 27 months old. So's the poodle.

The Poodle too?


Wow, that must be some story.......

 

[_Lynn_]

The Poodle too?


Wow, that must be some story.......

It is.

 

[O2]

Looking forward to it.......I think