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[clownprince2008]

Let me just fill everyone in on the details first. This is a celebrity story involving Natalie Portman so I can already sense the interest waning and hear the collective groans. I just wrote this as a quick little story and tried to include some ounce of realism no matter how small. I don’t think this is as crowd pleasing as my first effort was but it’s an enjoyable little tale for those of you who want to turn your brain off. Enjoy the story. Thanks in advance for any and all feedback.

Oh, and I apologise beforehand for all the Star Wars references in the story but that’s my idea of reminding the reader of who my female lead is. Here's the link:


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=421754

 

[clownprince2008]

Not to be an attention whore but I'm going to have to bump this. If only to have my story mildly praised or completely trashed.