"Same Title" Challenge #4

JUDO

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Okay! Listen up! Here's the meat (below is the mustard). Embrace this with relish, slide it between some buns and we'll all cook out.

TITLE: Tangled Fluorescence

When to post: Monday (one week from today -- I'm so generous), February 17th, 2003

When to read: (eg. comment, make fun of, praise, etc.) Tuesday, February 18th, 2003


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Now, here's how I thought of this one.

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Well, I wanted to find something that sounded like a title and I wanted it to be thought provoking and multi-dimensional. In other words, capable of being interpreted in many ways.

Thinking of something 'wordy' was my first choice and I sparked to:

Vociferous Obfuscation

As fun as it sounds, I think it might point some of the wordsmiths around here to use complicated, not-used-very-often wordage and I didn't want to go there. I didn't want it to sound so far away from everyday speech. So, I tried to make it simpler and came up with:

Hard Truth

Didn't really like that.

Then, I started looking for word combinations that were common to me, but perhaps thought-provoking, multi-dimensional, etc. and came up with:

Girl Talk
Loose Lips

Didn't really think these were clever enough, even though they might have sufficed. As a result, I looked back at the words we'd had up until now:

Broken Blinds, Shadow Theater and Foaf

Foaf being the least favorite of mine with no real obvious connotations attached to it (being a recent computer anagram used in email), I decided to look at the first two titles and look for commonalities to see if I could draw some useful characterisitcs from them:

Both have something that creates shadow and light, and venetian blinds are rather theatrical, and the other has 'theater' in it... Okay, so 'a creative movement' with 'shadows and/or light.' I can find things for that.

I came up with:
Gloam Ballet, Twilight Tango and Dirty Dandle

Nothing really, truly sparked me here, so:

Started thinking of female form and geometry, came up with:

Perfect Fit
Curve Left & Turn

Many of my thoughts kept centering around some kind of dance, but nothing really stuck. I remembered a question I had about space recently,"Does space fluoresce?" (in the presence of light and shadow?).

Fluoresce. Great word.

"Tangoed Fluoresce" came to mind. Then, it shifted...

"Tangled Fluorescence" - now, there was a title!

I looked the words up for definitions at www.dictionary.com:

v. tan·gled, tan·gling, tan·gles
v. tr.

1.To mix together or intertwine in a confused mass; snarl.
2.To involve in hampering or awkward complications; entangle.
3.To catch and hold in or as if in a net; entrap. See Synonyms at catch.

v. intr.

1.To be or become entangled.
2.Informal. To enter into argument, dispute, or conflict: tangled with the law.

n.

1.A confused, intertwined mass.
2.A jumbled or confused state or condition.
3.A state of bewilderment.
4.Informal. An argument or altercation.

[Middle English tangilen, to involve in an embarrassing situation, variant of tagilen, probably of Scandinavian origin; akin to Swedish dialectal taggla, to entangle.]

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fluo•res•cence

noun

1.The emission of electromagnetic radiation, especially of visible light, stimulated in a substance by the absorption of incident radiation and persisting only as long as the stimulating radiation is continued.
2.The property of emitting such radiation.
3.The radiation so emitted.
4. That property which some transparent bodies have of producing at their surface, or within their substance, light different in color from the mass of the material, as when green crystals of fluor spar afford blue reflections. It is due not to the difference in the color of a distinct surface layer, but to the power which the substance has of modifying the light incident upon it. The light emitted by fluorescent substances is in general of lower refrangibility than the incident light.
5. light emitted during absorption of radiation of some other (invisible) wavelength


Whoa! All great stuff and lots of interpretations to be had.

Okay, "Tangled Fluorescence" it is.

Reading through this stuff, I thought of a few more good titles:

Absorbing Invisibility
Wave Length
and
Integral Bifurcation

But, "Tangled Fluorescence" is the title for this week. What do you think?

;)
- Judo

Edited for complete bumbling!
 
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I'm so in it's not even funny. Such a great title...

edited to add: I hadn't even notice the deadline. Whatever happened to the two-days idea? Chickened out? *chuckles*

edited again to add: what does 'bumbling' mean?
 
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All those titles you're not using, I'm laying claim to them!!!
I'm starting with Curve Left & Turn, so no one touch it. :catroar:
Oh yeah, and I'm in on the new one.
 
Twilight Tango

is MINE. Besides I can't do titles--everyone here knows that my titles suck. Kdog never mentions me in the freakin good titles thread. Because. I can't write them.


P.S. I'm in.
 
New....

Is this open to everyone? I wouldn't want to step on any toes however, I love the word play.


Sorry for no witty signature, I am still trying to figure out how everything works around here.
 
Is this open to everyone? I wouldn't want to step on any toes however, I love the word play.



It is open to all takers and welcome!

(You will, however--by virtue of your joining in--be harrassed by female poets with tawdry avatars. :) )
 
Great title, thanks for all the soul searching you did Judo. Such a relief after foaf! I'm in. :)
 
although your word association thought process made me a bit dizzy, I'm probably in.
 
(You will, however--by virtue of your joining in--be harrassed by female poets with tawdry avatars. )


Thank you for the welcome!
I promise to be as brazen when I figure out how to get an avatar!
:D
 
OT said:
although your word association thought process made me a bit dizzy, I'm probably in.

It was a handicap tactic, I think. Trying to throw us off. ;)
 
I'm in. GREAT title.

And don't I get an avatar soon?


Anxiously.




Cordelia
 
This rookie poet wannabe is in, too. Great title, Judo--I love it.

Cordy....you need 8 more posts for an avatar.

Take care--AA
 
May I toss in a possible title? Silken Waves...not as good as any of Judo's though--I like all those titles because they do get me to thinking. AA
 
I've already used curve left and turn, and absorbing invisibility. So no touching! And my Tangled Fluorescence is finished. :)
 
WickedEve said:
And my Tangled Fluorescence is finished. :)

So, my methods are catching. Is that it, Evie?

PS - By the way, all the titles are trade-marked, copyrighted and registered, so when your stuff posts, be sure to send the money my way.

;)
 
JUDO said:
Okay! Listen up! Here's the meat (below is the mustard). Embrace this with relish, slide it between some buns and we'll all cook out.

TITLE: Tangled Fluorescence

When to post: Monday (one week from today -- I'm so generous), February 17th, 2003

When to read: (eg. comment, make fun of, praise, etc.) Tuesday, February 18th, 2003


You really are generous, JUDO.

The reason she did this is so those of us with high-maintenance children and long-houred jobs can get inspired, write, and edit a poem in time.

I, for one, appreciate it.

Maybethis time I'll make it a ghazal.

Gratefully,



Cordelia
 
I have already started an "Absorbing Invisibility" poem. I hope I didn't tread on any toes.

Word-Swimming,


Cordelia
 
JUDO said:
So, my methods are catching. Is that it, Evie?

PS - By the way, all the titles are trade-marked, copyrighted and registered, so when your stuff posts, be sure to send the money my way.

;)
Well, I used those titles in the T.F. poem. So... I guess the poem is kind of partially yours. hee hee
 
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