sadist mom

I've had a story idea similar to this that I've never been able to flesh out. In high school mom was a typical cheerleader bully type. In college she falls for a nerdy guy and leaves her old ways behind.

The son starts college and his old high school bully is there. The bully thinks he is toughening up the kid and doesn't see himself as a bully. The mom confronts the bully, against her sons wishes, and there is an instant spark between them.

As the bully and mom get closer, the more of her old personality surfaces. And it ends up with the new couple bullying the son and husband.

I agree it is dark, but if done right it could be a fun story.
 
I've had a story idea similar to this that I've never been able to flesh out. In high school mom was a typical cheerleader bully type. In college she falls for a nerdy guy and leaves her old ways behind.

The son starts college and his old high school bully is there. The bully thinks he is toughening up the kid and doesn't see himself as a bully. The mom confronts the bully, against her sons wishes, and there is an instant spark between them.

As the bully and mom get closer, the more of her old personality surfaces. And it ends up with the new couple bullying the son and husband.

I agree it is dark, but if done right it could be a fun story.


Sounds like a fun read and perfect jerkoff material for the humiliation fetishists. Maybe throw in a bit about how the son is forced to "clean up" after the bully and eventually gets turned into his fluffer.

All to make him stronger, of course. It's for his own good.
 
I've had a story idea similar to this that I've never been able to flesh out. In high school mom was a typical cheerleader bully type. In college she falls for a nerdy guy and leaves her old ways behind.

The son starts college and his old high school bully is there. The bully thinks he is toughening up the kid and doesn't see himself as a bully. The mom confronts the bully, against her sons wishes, and there is an instant spark between them.

As the bully and mom get closer, the more of her old personality surfaces. And it ends up with the new couple bullying the son and husband.

I agree it is dark, but if done right it could be a fun story.
I find it difficult to find anything erotic in bullying. I know, the humiliation angle, but that is tricky to get right. Humiliation games are mostly pretexts if they are any fun at all.

But since that seems to be the theme here, how about the son and husband refuse to put up with her after a while? They restrain her and give her a good spanking. (Maybe they talk her into modeling her old cheerleader uniform first.) Okay, non-consensual, but she finds thats she enjoys it. Family harmony resumes, That would fit into a theory that dominant people are often secretly fascinated with submission too. Maybe she keeps the original bully as a side fling.

Call it "Bad Cheerleader Mom." That will bring in the readers. Maybe I'll try it myself.

P.S.: Write it with her as the narrator, and see how that goes.
 
I've had a story idea similar to this that I've never been able to flesh out. In high school mom was a typical cheerleader bully type. In college she falls for a nerdy guy and leaves her old ways behind.

The son starts college and his old high school bully is there. The bully thinks he is toughening up the kid and doesn't see himself as a bully. The mom confronts the bully, against her sons wishes, and there is an instant spark between them.

As the bully and mom get closer, the more of her old personality surfaces. And it ends up with the new couple bullying the son and husband.

I agree it is dark, but if done right it could be a fun story.
This is a nice that i would love to read
 
I didn’t remember the name because it wasn’t very interesting to me, but such a story is already on the site. And there are many chapters. You can search. I remember there was a scene where Mom helps a bully prepare for an exam, motivating him with her body.
 
I didn’t remember the name because it wasn’t very interesting to me, but such a story is already on the site. And there are many chapters. You can search. I remember there was a scene where Mom helps a bully prepare for an exam, motivating him with her body.
I agree. All the stories I have seen that touch on this theme just don't work for me for whatever reason. For me it needs to be a slow burn, but of the stories I have seen, the mom/wife immediately joins forces with the bully, and that doesn't seem "realistic" to me and takes me out. I have tried writing my own version of the story but am not happy with what I have come up with either.
 
I think “mom sleeps with bully” is also just uninteresting. It’s not like most dudes want to fuck their own mothers. There’s betrayal in the familial sense, not the actual romantic sense. That’s like a divorced dad remarrying a woman and starting a new family, leaving his first batch of kids in the cold. That’s not sexy, just sad.
 
I believe that a sadistic mom could be used as the basis but not sure if I would go the same route as proposed.
 
For me, this would work better with wife and husband. Possibly hubby is bullied at work.
 
For me, this would work better with wife and husband. Possibly hubby is bullied at work.
I do agree with you. I personally can't get into the mindset of a woman doing this to her child. I do think that there is an interesting story idea in there that the right person could flesh out, though of the stories I have seen no one has done it, for me at least.

The wife and husband is, to me a more "realistic" story. Among my incomplete stories is one where a newlywed couple get an apartment next door to the husband's old school bully. The men fall into their old behaviors while the wife is torn. Maybe I'll dig that up and see if I can get it finished.
 
I do agree with you. I personally can't get into the mindset of a woman doing this to her child. I do think that there is an interesting story idea in there that the right person could flesh out, though of the stories I have seen no one has done it, for me at least.

The wife and husband is, to me a more "realistic" story. Among my incomplete stories is one where a newlywed couple get an apartment next door to the husband's old school bully. The men fall into their old behaviors while the wife is torn. Maybe I'll dig that up and see if I can get it finished.

Well, it’d fundamentally only work if a son had incestuous thoughts for their mother. Since we’re pretty hard-wired by genetics to disfavor this, it’s just going to be a niche genre that only emotional masochists would enjoy. They definitely exist, but I just don’t see it as a hot seller.
 
I think the mum might have sex with the bully to protect the son, but falling in love with him, humiliate him,no thats a step tol far,thats not realistic, A story needs to be realistic to draw the reader in. Sex or a relationship thats possible
 
Absolutely.

But you'll have a tough time persuading the lazy writers and readers of fantasy/SF schlock of this truism.
For me if its not realistic i loose interest, i like to put myself there,how would i react, thats what excites me in a story
 
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