Running Virgin

[sugarcookie68]

I have an idea of me driving down the road .. fantasizing about a stranger to break my virginity.. i pass a hitch hiker and i glance back in the rear view mirror and decide to go back and pick him up.. as we are driving my car breaks down, and i pop out to see whats wrong and as i am bent over the car in my skirt i feel him press his body up against mine and i get scared and start running...

 

[Epmd607]

the part about the guy pulling his cock out I don't like. But maybe if you set it up nicer, have the running virgin run in a more playful way.

 

[Black_Dahlia]

Seems unlikely a defenceless girl would pick up a hitch-hiker. Probably better if it's someone she knows, or thinks she knows, maybe a guy from college she's giving a lift home for the summer break. The car breaks down on a deserted highway and he sees his chance...

Of course, he has to catch her, otherwise there's no story. Unless she escapes him, knocks on the door of an old farmhouse, and finds herself in even more trouble...

 

[JMaxwell69]

I'm not sure what the problem with the guy pulling it out is. It happens. It's rare and freaky, but it happens. The only way I see it as a problem is if the guy is supposed to turn out normal and lovable. Then it strains credulity.

It also happens that people who sometimes appear to be clean-cut and normal are superfreaks. I think a naive and prone to guilt woman might stop if she felt bad for the guy. Maybe he's a nice enough looking guy (dressed decently and kempt) and he's in the rain with no hope of getting his vehicle fixed. I wouldn't encourage a woman to stop, but it's been known to happen.

Having said all this, keep in mind you are setting up a dark story. If you want a dark story, I think it's a reasonable start. If you want a happy ending (no pun intended), I think it is a set up that is hard to make work.

 

[darkbeast]

I'm not sure what the problem with the guy pulling it out is. It happens. It's rare and freaky, but it happens. The only way I see it as a problem is if the guy is supposed to turn out normal and lovable. Then it strains credulity.

It also happens that people who sometimes appear to be clean-cut and normal are superfreaks. I think a naive and prone to guilt woman might stop if she felt bad for the guy. Maybe he's a nice enough looking guy (dressed decently and kempt) and he's in the rain with no hope of getting his vehicle fixed. I wouldn't encourage a woman to stop, but it's been known to happen.

Having said all this, keep in mind you are setting up a dark story. If you want a dark story, I think it's a reasonable start. If you want a happy ending (no pun intended), I think it is a set up that is hard to make work.

I agree, we can't always write stories where everyone makes the best decisions each and every time. THAT is unrealistic. People get suckered all the time. Maybe she meets him at a gas station and wants a ride back to his car. Maybe she is falling asleep and figures it would be safer if there was someone to chat with. Whatever the motive, getting him in the car isn't too big of a deal.

What is being set up here, though, is a rape scenario. Rape after a foot chase.

 

[grignardreagent]

running through the cunt of virgin is not always a niice idea and not always what all the people get to xperience

seems a lil kinda of messy experience of sex

yet who get to do it
they njoy it
and its an experience like no other!!!!!!!!!!

 

[sugarcookie68]

I have an idea of me driving down the road .. fantasizing about a stranger to break my virginity.. i pass a hitch hiker and i glance back in the rear view mirror and decide to go back and pick him up.. as we are driving my car breaks down, and i pop out to see whats wrong and as i am bent over the car in my skirt i feel him press his body up against mine and i get scared and start running...

Im sorry if i dont make any sense when i posted this idea, im new to this and thought i would give it a shot i thank you all for your opinion .. thats what i wanted, so sorry if i should not of posted it being so new to this site.. one person said i have lil sexual exp.. that is not the case at all.
I was just trying to do something different everyone has an opinion and i like feed back.. but hey thats why im still considered "a lit Virgin" lmao Muah to all

Be Safe, Be sweet, Be Yourself ..Sugar

 

[Wess69]

hello

I like your idea and think as long as it gets you hot and wet and turns you on then anything can happen in your story! you can make the guy do what ever you want after all its your story and your fantasy right?? Keep up the good work if you ever feel like talking about your ideas hit me up I'd love to listen to you .
Wes

 

[fireraven43]

Hey

You have a great outline for a story; that is what an outline is for, it helps you see your ideas and lets you add more and take out what does not fit.

This story idea is reasonable to me, because I have known a lot of females that have done things that most people would have considered: stupid, dumb, dangerousness, or naive. I myself have picked people up off the street, and thank god nothing bad happened, but on a few occasion something good did happen.

There have been guys that I have known that everyone who knew them thought they were the nicest guys in the world. Then later on they have turned out to be some of the worst people in the world. So, it is possible for this "nice" looking guy to turn into a guy who would rape someone.

There are any number of ways that he could take her and there still be a happy or good ending to the story. Somewhere in the story she could gain control and do a number on him, or may they are faking it, and they are really role playing and the reader does not find that out until the end of the story, or he kidnaps her and make her his slave and we find out what happens in the next story. Why do stories have to have a happy ending?

Baby, I think you need to run with this idea and see where it takes you, because the story is inside of you; just follow the story it will guide you, it will tell you how it should end.

Do not let anyone discourage you, because if your story makes you wet and happy that is all that matters.

As for me I would love to read more.