Rough Idea

[The_Rabbi]

I have a rough idea for a story but I'm not sure - a) if it's any good - and b) where to go with hit. This is the gist of it.

Two guys arrive at a girl’s house. They’ve both been seeing her and don’t know about each other. When they discover what’s going on they start arguing. The argument turns into a fight. After grappling on the floor for a while, the larger of the two men becomes aware that he is becoming aroused by all this body to body contact. The girl has been watching the whole thing and she notices the bulge in the bigger man’s pants.
What comes next?

The girl could help the smaller guy get free and between them they sissify the big guy and humiliate him.
Or;
The bigger guy overpowers the smaller guy and rapes him.
Or
The smaller guy notices bigger guys hard on and gets turned on himself and they have great sex and then turn on the girl who was two-timing them.
Or…

Any ideas?

 

[emap]

I'm sure everybody knows what I am gonna say, but well I think the bigger guy takes the smaller guy, both enjoy it lots then they take her and all three decide they like this new relationship.

 

[Maeten]

Or there is an unexpected different option. The girl could decide that she in fact likes both the guys, one happens to be nicer to her, call it the smaller guy, but the other guy can fulfill her sexual needs so she spends some time with him -- albeit mostly in the passions of hot furious sex.

In this case the girl might notice the larger guy gets a hard on -- I'd imagine he'd have to have quite a large budge in order to notice while they wrestle, otherwise I'd be highly doubtful she'd be able to see it. Alternatively she could just not care and wants to spice the entire thing up since she is getting turned on by her two lovers wrestling. In either case she could pleas with them to stop a moment or even say: "Hey guys, look over here".

At this point she could simply take off her shirt, or her dress and follow that up with a monologue about how she likes both of the guys, but in order to determine which of the guys will get her tonight that guy has to be the winner in the wrestling match. The other guy will serve both of them for the rest of the evening. She then goes and sits down somewhere watching them finish it out.

At the end of the evening, she suggest that she likes this idea, of having one of them in the bed while the other one 'helps' out and suggests they switch off after this point.

This is probably an odd twist to it and may be a bit convoluted but I think it might be believable.

 

[The_Rabbi]

It seems that "happy endings" are the choice here. I was thinking of a little more conflict. But it may still end with a happy ending.