Roses are Red, Violets are blue... Part Deux

[37_ttej]

(Ahem)

Roses are red
Violets are blue
The rule's back in force
But 'twas fun, it's true.

 

[EbersMoll]

Roses are red
The situation is dire
Jett the rebel
Set the rule book on fire

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I’m off to bed
Goodnight to you

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red
Violets are blur
Jett is soooo tired
Wordsh shtarting sluuur

 

[Trubbycat]

Your panties are red
Your stilettos are black
Rubbing against you
I shot in your crack

 

[fsa52]

Roses are red
Others another hue
Always enjoyable
Chatting with you!

 

[ccs29745]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I've got a crush
On you

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Your soft little snores
Are pretty cute too.

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red
Daffodils yellow
I'm cuddly and squishy
Just like a marshmallow

(erm)

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Have I killed this thread
Like I often do?

 

[EbersMoll]

Roses are red
Hold back your tears
To restart this thread
Takes two engineers!

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red
We know how things work.
We’re awesome in bed
Don’t ask us to twerk!

(seriously)

 

[fsa52]

Roses may be red
Others may be pink
Obvious to me
Both your rhyming talents don’t stink!!

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red,
Violets are blue
True that our rhymes
Don’t stink until we obviously get it wrong.
Wait, sometimes they do.

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red,
Jett's love is true.
When I write this shit
It's all just for you!

 

[fsa52]

Roses are red
The day is quite new
So get your ass moving
As there’s plenty to do!!!

 

[ccs29745]

Roses are red
The day is quite new
So get your ass moving
As there’s plenty to do!!!

Amen

Roses are red
Violets are blue
You've got me running
There's things left to do.

 

[Trubbycat]

Violets are blue
Roses are red
I am ecstatic
When you're giving me head

 

[badjanus]

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
This is me telling
How proud I am of you.

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
This is me telling
How proud I am of you.

Roses are red
Aw, shucks, I’d blush.
I know that I am
A bit of a lush.

 

[EbersMoll]

Roses are red
My glutes are tender
All of this squatting
Affected my rear end, er!

 

[badjanus]

Roses are red
Aw, shucks, I’d blush.
I know that I am
A bit of a lush.

Roses are red,
They don't bloom when it's colder
Hush my little lush,
You may rest on my shoulder

 

[EbersMoll]

Roses are red
The new week begins
I’m still in my bed
Contemplating the bins

 

[37_ttej]

(Jett is away this week tutoring at poetry summer camp)

So, welcome everyone.
We're going to start with a basic form.
It begins,

Roses are red,​

Violets are blue​

The first two lines are thus a couplet with four syllables each.
The final two lines are also a couplet with either four or five syllables each.
And the rhyming form is ABCB but can also be ABAB.

Remember this is a light-hearted poetic form in which you can infuse romantic emotion with a sense of fun.
So have a go and I'll provide you with feedback.

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

hay Gurl​

wanna fuck?​

Feedback:

OK, well it's a start.​

I can see the thought you've put into it.​

Let's try getting more syllables into lines three and four.​

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

Dam gurl dem titties​

Wanna sex wit me?​

Feedback:

Yes, correct - and matching number of syllables, in lines three and four.​

Well done.​

Have a go at rhyming the second and fourth lines.​

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

Yurr phat ass real fine​

i gotta fuck you​

Feedback:

Er, nicely done.​

And you've maintained the syllable count.​

Let's continue to work on the spelling.​

What about a more light-hearted approach to your romantic gesture?​

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

​

Fuck yur​

romanse dickwad​

If'n i wanna bitch for​

sexy tim I'll pay da pimp at​

ta club.​

Feedback:

*sigh*​

I really didn't think it would be this hard.​

Just two lines!​

Wait ...​

Is that a cinquain?​

Unbelievable.​

I don't get paid enough for this shit.​

(PS: Jett is not a poetry tutor. Nor is he at summer camp. But he is on a short break.)

 

[Littlefox89]

Roses are red,
I’m going to bed,
Violets are blue,
Won’t you come too?