:rose:My Ode to Moms:rose:

[CrowSingsOver]

Heres to all the lasting things!
like wonder bras
and pads with wings

like meatloaf in the fridge for weeks
and the bathroom sink that only leaks

To hell with all the things that go!
The radiator
my pantyhose

I'd trade them all
In the blink of an eye
For a dryer
That would really dry!

 

[WickedEve]

I really like your first stanza.

 

[Guest]

I agree with WE (hi!) - keep saying that stanza to your self over and over. Get the rhythm and the words of the following stanzas should be more manageable.


I failed with the 2nd in the time I have but here's the 3rd and 4th.

To Hell with anything that goes,
The radiator,
Pantyhose.

I'd take it all within my stride
For a dryer
that really dried.

Cheers, it's got the makings of a keeper.

 

[CrowSingsOver]

ahhh, but it's all in fun. I can leave the serious stuff for later, right?