Role playing with an element of blackmail, mild bondage and VERY multiple orgasms.

[LovesDancing]

I'm a newby to this writing story stuff, but I've got this fantasy in my head that's been occupying my thoughts for quite a while. The tale begins when a wife (very beautiful of course, it's a fantasy) asks her husband after an evening of making love how he would "take her". It is NOT a rape fantasy, it's a nonviolent story where the husband creates a complex scenario where he gets his wife to submit herself to "someone else" knowing that it's him. It's a complex story also because when the husband has this all set he starts to ask himself "am I doing something which could damage the love we have for each other". Making the story I want to do more difficult, I very much want it to be both husband and wife telling the story, and I don't want to have the wife tell her side of the story with the same feel or language that the man tells his side. To that end I need a volunteer female story writer to tell the wife's side of the story. To some degree I'll direct how the story unfolds but I'm totally open to any ideas the the woman writer has to make it hotter (or to tell me that what I'm writing is way over the top). How do I go and get this started, this is a story that I want to write.

 

[mastadonika]

I'm a newby to this writing story stuff, but I've got this fantasy in my head that's been occupying my thoughts for quite a while. The tale begins when a wife (very beautiful of course, it's a fantasy) asks her husband after an evening of making love how he would "take her". It is NOT a rape fantasy, it's a nonviolent story where the husband creates a complex scenario where he gets his wife to submit herself to "someone else" knowing that it's him. It's a complex story also because when the husband has this all set he starts to ask himself "am I doing something which could damage the love we have for each other". Making the story I want to do more difficult, I very much want it to be both husband and wife telling the story, and I don't want to have the wife tell her side of the story with the same feel or language that the man tells his side. To that end I need a volunteer female story writer to tell the wife's side of the story. To some degree I'll direct how the story unfolds but I'm totally open to any ideas the the woman writer has to make it hotter (or to tell me that what I'm writing is way over the top). How do I go and get this started, this is a story that I want to write.

Is it similar to True Lies film scene?

Maybe you should first describe the wife's experience and then the revelation with the husband's experience.

 

[LovesDancing]

I'm thinking more along the lines of a he talks about what he's doing, then she talks about how it's making her feel, then rinse and repeat. The scenario is that she is a very loving wife and they have a great life together. Before they met, however, in another part of the nation she had a half power trip half cruel pleasure thing going where she used her great beauty to lead men (and a few women) on with the possibility of them "being the one". One of those men has found her and threatens her with telling her husband about what she was like before they met, forever tarnishing his ideal of her as being such a loving person.
Friday she asks about being taken. Her husband goes quiet, and she asks him to tell her about it. He tells her that "sometime very soon he won't tell her about it, he'll show her". He builds that anticipation starting Sunday by leaving a message on her car simply saying "Shall we play a game?". Monday thru Thursday, more messages, more anticipation. She has a rough day at work Thursday, and when she comes home late he has a bubble bath waiting, after that he carries her to a massage table and a slow, intimate massage. While the massage is going on he laments to himself that he wishes his hands were soft, that her skin deserves to be caressed by soft things rather than his hard hands. He then carries her to their bedroom where he lays her in bed and strokes her hair. While doing that the doubts he's had the past week rise up to create an element of fear in him, will what he's planning cause her to see a part of herself that will disturb her or even worse to show her something in him that she might be repelled by.
But for them it's too late, he's gone too far to just let it drop, his wife's anticipation has built up too much, and it's time to begin.
When she goes to her car Friday morning there's an envelope on her car that simply says "The Game". Then it gets hot and steamy.

 

[LovesDancing]

Like I said, I'm a newby. Can I pick someone off the internet whose pictures are posted a lot and tell the readers that when I'm describing the wife that they should look at pictures of this real woman and pretend that the wife looks like her. Does this represent some ick factor that Literotica doesn't want writers to include in a story?

 

[mastadonika]

I'm thinking more along the lines of a he talks about what he's doing, then she talks about how it's making her feel, then rinse and repeat. The scenario is that she is a very loving wife and they have a great life together. Before they met, however, in another part of the nation she had a half power trip half cruel pleasure thing going where she used her great beauty to lead men (and a few women) on with the possibility of them "being the one". One of those men has found her and threatens her with telling her husband about what she was like before they met, forever tarnishing his ideal of her as being such a loving person.
Friday she asks about being taken. Her husband goes quiet, and she asks him to tell her about it. He tells her that "sometime very soon he won't tell her about it, he'll show her". He builds that anticipation starting Sunday by leaving a message on her car simply saying "Shall we play a game?". Monday thru Thursday, more messages, more anticipation. She has a rough day at work Thursday, and when she comes home late he has a bubble bath waiting, after that he carries her to a massage table and a slow, intimate massage. While the massage is going on he laments to himself that he wishes his hands were soft, that her skin deserves to be caressed by soft things rather than his hard hands. He then carries her to their bedroom where he lays her in bed and strokes her hair. While doing that the doubts he's had the past week rise up to create an element of fear in him, will what he's planning cause her to see a part of herself that will disturb her or even worse to show her something in him that she might be repelled by.
But for them it's too late, he's gone too far to just let it drop, his wife's anticipation has built up too much, and it's time to begin.
When she goes to her car Friday morning there's an envelope on her car that simply says "The Game". Then it gets hot and steamy.

Seems like you already have all the major points for a story. All the Best!

 

[mastadonika]

Like I said, I'm a newby. Can I pick someone off the internet whose pictures are posted a lot and tell the readers that when I'm describing the wife that they should look at pictures of this real woman and pretend that the wife looks like her. Does this represent some ick factor that Literotica doesn't want writers to include in a story?

Pretty sure I have seen stuff like this in Lit. But you could just describe your characters, that seems to be the easiest.

I would recommend asking or taking the help of one of the Lit editors, who are available for free. They are very helpful, and knowledgeable about any story issues you ma be having.

 

[LovesDancing]

Pretty sure I have seen stuff like this in Lit. But you could just describe your characters, that seems to be the easiest.

I would recommend asking or taking the help of one of the Lit editors, who are available for free. They are very helpful, and knowledgeable about any story issues you ma be having.

Thanks for your kind words and help, but I'm not after easiest. I don't think its enough to describe a womans beauty, most stories talk about a woman's great body, I want readers to look at a woman's picture and put that image into the story I'm writing.