Revenge anyone?

[Axeltheswede]

I came across something interesting on another erotic story site. An author had two dozen stories, all with the same theme. His female lead ended up in a Mexican whorehouse.

It was fairly obvious, the guy had a lover run off to work in one. Or, he wished she would end up there voluntarily or not.

Would anyone like a story about revenge on a former lover? He or she doesn't have to end up in a whorehouse. Tell me who you want and what you would like to see happen. All ideas considered. Names can be changed to protect the guilty.

 

[ilovewriting]

No ideas, but i kinda like the general idea.

 

[penguindance]

 

[MrFrost]

Hmmm...I have a former bf I'd like to see bad stuff happen to, lol. How about his gf (the one he cheated on his real gf with) ended up being a man? lol

lol

 

[YIX]

*grin* Yeah, I would love to see this. Maybe use a guy though . . . say named Jon . . . you know, the vagrant wayward type likely to take off with a hard working girl's credit card, wanted for child support in six different states. And maybe a lover from his distant past, one he's all but forgotten about, needs some closure, so she looks him up, gets his address, sells him to some religious circus freaks who kidnap him and keep him locked in and chained up in a basement where they feed him dry dog food, alternately turn a high powered hose on him, and prostitute him out and go from there. Just an idea.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Quasimodem]

Instead of renting him out as a prostitute, they should hose him down, dress him up, and send him around delivering religious pamphlets, door to door.

That's much crueller.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Axeltheswede]

revenge

I can put up with your average circus freak. But, those religious ones, no way. "Loose the hounds" when they come to the door.

Guess I was thinking about more subtle means of revenge. Things like setting someone up to take what they have handed out to others comes to mind.

Any other ideas?

 

[penguindance]

 

[Axeltheswede]

revenge

I was thinking revenge somewhere short of a death penalty.

Subtle sounds easy, but writes hard. I like the cheating guy marrying the cheating woman. Brings a lot of old jokes to mind. "How do you stop a woman from having sex?" "Marry her".

How about this idea. Ice maiden shuts every guy down. Then she falls completely for the badest of the bad boys. Every guy she shut down watches her crawl after her "love". Too subtle?

 

[penguindance]

 

[RTWudder]

If I may add here. My lawyer always told me that "Revenge tastes sweeter from a cold plate". To make the person suffer the most, the "revenge" must be slow in coming and unidentifiable as to its origin. The revenge victim must never know for sure who has inflicted the plight upon him/her, but can only suppose forever.

If the offense is sexual, for example, then something needs to be introduced to the victim to slowly drain his/her sexual ability while increasing the desire for sex. The onset is slow and then realization sets in that there is something wrong. Too late. The victim suspects but can prove nothing, doubling the agony for years. Not knowing is the cruelest torture.

 

[Axeltheswede]

revenge

Problem number A. Building a believable frostiness for the little princess. She really has to have a "Fridgidaire" for a love muffin.

Problem number 46. She has to put some real burns on some guys.

Problems number #%^$@. Bad boy makes her "prove" her love and devotion by letting him "share" her charms with all those previous casualties. After she has been the guest of honor at the gangbang, bad boy dumps her because she's "used goods" so to speak.

Problem number 2. I can see the feedback now. The word "pig" will feature prominently.

What do you think?

 

[Axeltheswede]

Revenge

Very interesting, RT Wudder. As my friend, Dutch, would say, "dat revenge be some serious shit".

Sounds hard to pull off in the context of an erotic story. Loss of potentcy over time would sure dampen any erotic appeal. Food for thought as we try to has this out.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Axeltheswede]

Revenge

I might be porcine enough to do it justice. Can't help but feel there is still something missing.

Can anyone add a twist that would make it all work?

 

[Bob Waters]

I did one about an ex-wife getting revenge for being dumped by sending a porn video to her ex-hubby with her doing all kinds of stuff she didn't do for him


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=47394

Got a lot of people writing to me that she was a total bitch. I think I hit a nerve or something.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Axeltheswede]

Revenge

That works for a twist but it sure departs from the revenge idea. If she liked it, and discovers her sexuality, that cancels the revenge factor.

Have to puzzle over that one for a bit. A lot depends on how it looks on the page.

Neat story, Bob Waters. I have been a fan for a while. You write some good stories.

 

[Guest]

I have been working on a similar type story for a while, but as usual, I have several holes I cannot fill in to my satisfaction.
This story is more of a mistaken revenge than true revenge, so I am not sure if it really belongs here.

The basic plot is that two friends and co-workers, one is white and the other is black or hispanic, and both are up for a promotion. The white guy gets it, and the friend sees it as racially motivated, so sets out to get revenge.

The friend and his wife plan to seduce the white guys wife or daughter (of age of course) and essentially make her their personal prostitute. The plan is to get their friends, co-workers and people on the street to fuck her.

The man seduces her and she reluctantly goes along and is coerced into becoming a prostitute for them. I personally do not like forced or extreme rape type stories, but fairly mild force is where the woman eventually gives in semi-against her will is better, in my opinion.

Eventually, the man learns that he did not get the promotion because he was in line for an even better position, largly at the prodding of his white friend.

The couple discusses the "problem" but decide that since they have already turned her into a whore, they may as well keep her...

I am not sure, I guess I find this idea appealing because it has a twist ending. Does anyone else think this sounds worthwhile?

 

[MsLinnet]

I have been working on a similar type story for a while, but as usual, I have several holes I cannot fill in to my satisfaction.
This story is more of a mistaken revenge than true revenge, so I am not sure if it really belongs here.

The basic plot is that two friends and co-workers, one is white and the other is black or hispanic, and both are up for a promotion. The white guy gets it, and the friend sees it as racially motivated, so sets out to get revenge.

The friend and his wife plan to seduce the white guys wife or daughter (of age of course) and essentially make her their personal prostitute. The plan is to get their friends, co-workers and people on the street to fuck her.

The man seduces her and she reluctantly goes along and is coerced into becoming a prostitute for them. I personally do not like forced or extreme rape type stories, but fairly mild force is where the woman eventually gives in semi-against her will is better, in my opinion.

Eventually, the man learns that he did not get the promotion because he was in line for an even better position, largly at the prodding of his white friend.

The couple discusses the "problem" but decide that since they have already turned her into a whore, they may as well keep her...

I am not sure, I guess I find this idea appealing because it has a twist ending. Does anyone else think this sounds worthwhile?

I think it has promise so go for it


love Linnet

 

[Bizkit_Writer]

Revenge story

What I wanted to do for a LOoooooong time to an old bf, good grief, id love a story about him maybe someone raping his mother? I met the woman and she hated me for some odd reason, hmmmmm revenge story not a bad idea (scratches head pondering my possibilites)