Hello, I am starting up again, and have competed a Loving Wives story linked with Amorous Goods. It is a stand alone story. I am looking for eyes on story pacing, grammar, and help with some stream of consciousness sections. I have written in Loving Wives and Sci-fi. I have started three other stories, one is extending one of my sci-fi stories, and will be posted in chapters.
Please post to me, if you are willing to help.
Please post to me, if you are willing to help.
