Response to the anonymous emailer

geronimo_appleby

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GIVE ME A BREAK
03/08/05 By: Anonymous in usa
I should have known from the serious intro that the story was crap.

I know its a fantasy site but please give us a little reality with our fantasy

First you only have low sperm count so various things are done with drugs to try to get you there. But no why try that!!!!

Then why hire a respectable sperm donor outfit that does this sort of work, no of course not lets just advertise in the paper for a stud!!

And then my personal favorite, I think I am too tense I need to be fucked properly.

I like the whole impregnation fantasy but this may be the worst done story in this area I have ever read.

Sorry that you feel that way. Where I can appreciate critical feedback, and everyone is entitled to their opinion, the cloak of anonymity gives me the right hump.
To you it may be crap, but please bear in mind that I took time and effort to produce this, along with putting it out for everyone to judge. (and of course comment upon)
So whilst I can take note of your comments, and of course endevour to produce more substantial work in future, you're always invited to submit your own. If you have submitted, is there any chance I could perhaps take a look at it.
Regards all the same. :p
Rick
 
More anonymous

It's a good job I've got a thick skin.
I don't think the writer of this feedback knows it's a story. The character isn't based on me!! :nana:


why write childish b/s
03/08/05 By: Anonymous in usa
you know what to do,go home kick her and him out.get some balls,so far you haven't had any.she said it for you,she was going with the other guy.so let her get the fuck on,get another woman simple,and stop crying like some wimp.
 
Thats what I sometimes hate about feedback. Some remark on the actual premise of the story, not how well written it might be.
 
I think that half the people who read stories on Lit type sites, think they are true.

Duh..... and we wonder at the comments some make.... After a while you just laugh and go on....
 
More comments.

Here are some more comments on the story.

Well as cuckolding is - so cuckolding goes!!!

Why the dileberation author - with cuckolding in Loving Wives you have already commited suicide with any author credentials you may have had. Move it to FETISH where it may be liked.

Too bad both your hands weren't on the keyboard during this story's conception as cuckolding is a pitiful, perverted and male demeaning theme isn't it! Sure the jaded sickies need it to get off but they don't need a talented author to do so as you have done here.

Selfishly, I hope you don't walk this demented downward path again as we need talented authors to arouse and entertain us - not to sicken and anger us non-sickies. Please think about it won't you.

My answer is that Lit sometimes overrule the category that a story is originally submitted to. Who are the 'jaded sickies'?? Why open the story when there are enough clues to give away the general theme at the description line adjacent to the title? :rolleyes:

By the way IT'S A STORY, IT'S NOT REAL!!!!!
 
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TxRad said:
I think that half the people who read stories on Lit type sites, think they are true.

Duh..... and we wonder at the comments some make.... After a while you just laugh and go on....
Oh, I'm laughing, believe me. It's the anonymous bollox that grips me!! LOL :nana:
 
the latest

the latest piece of constructive criticism:

:nana: Just like the other pieces of low class poorly written shit you write all the
time.Lots of words that say nothing and go nowhere. :nana:

And I have a fair idea who sent it.
 
Geronimo,

I thought for the most part the story was very hot, I don't really care for erotic stories that get really serious but that's my preference and no comment on the value of your story. I also thought that the comments were unusually harsh, seriously, crazy negative, I don't know why people have to be like that.

WA
 
What is the point of giving some writer a bit of feedback? Why do some of these people use the "hit-and-run" method? Personally, I am so not that blonde :kiss:

If I'm gonna take time out to ready a story and feel compelled to make a comment, good or bad, I prefer getting comments back from the writer.

I never said I was normal, just easily entertained.
 
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