geronimo_appleby
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GIVE ME A BREAK
03/08/05 By: Anonymous in usa
I should have known from the serious intro that the story was crap.
I know its a fantasy site but please give us a little reality with our fantasy
First you only have low sperm count so various things are done with drugs to try to get you there. But no why try that!!!!
Then why hire a respectable sperm donor outfit that does this sort of work, no of course not lets just advertise in the paper for a stud!!
And then my personal favorite, I think I am too tense I need to be fucked properly.
I like the whole impregnation fantasy but this may be the worst done story in this area I have ever read.
Sorry that you feel that way. Where I can appreciate critical feedback, and everyone is entitled to their opinion, the cloak of anonymity gives me the right hump.
To you it may be crap, but please bear in mind that I took time and effort to produce this, along with putting it out for everyone to judge. (and of course comment upon)
So whilst I can take note of your comments, and of course endevour to produce more substantial work in future, you're always invited to submit your own. If you have submitted, is there any chance I could perhaps take a look at it.
Regards all the same.
Rick
03/08/05 By: Anonymous in usa
I should have known from the serious intro that the story was crap.
I know its a fantasy site but please give us a little reality with our fantasy
First you only have low sperm count so various things are done with drugs to try to get you there. But no why try that!!!!
Then why hire a respectable sperm donor outfit that does this sort of work, no of course not lets just advertise in the paper for a stud!!
And then my personal favorite, I think I am too tense I need to be fucked properly.
I like the whole impregnation fantasy but this may be the worst done story in this area I have ever read.
Sorry that you feel that way. Where I can appreciate critical feedback, and everyone is entitled to their opinion, the cloak of anonymity gives me the right hump.
To you it may be crap, but please bear in mind that I took time and effort to produce this, along with putting it out for everyone to judge. (and of course comment upon)
So whilst I can take note of your comments, and of course endevour to produce more substantial work in future, you're always invited to submit your own. If you have submitted, is there any chance I could perhaps take a look at it.
Regards all the same.

Rick