Satisfaction ch.01 by Prizmatic caught my eye because of the title (also because it had an "H" so early in the day!). I'm a huge fan of the Rolling Stones anthem- it seems often to be the theme song of my life. Well, this story has nothing to do with that. It is about pure carnal incest brother/sister sex. I found the haste with which the sibs jumped to fucking to be unrealistic, and the dialogue was not realistic, but hey, it was dialogue driven, so points for trying. It also has strong graphic sex, and uncliched choices of adjectives, so is refreshing and smutty all at once. Since this is only Priz's second Lit entry, and more is promised, I eagerly await Priz' growth as a writer.
Just wanted to thank sirhugs for the review & advice. I also wanted to mention comment #1 by RichardS50. He didn't like the story, which I have no problem with, and in a way I was flattered because I am a woman and I was trying to write this from a man's viewpoint/for men. Although I must admit I wouldn't mind being fucked like this (NOT BY MY BROTHER THOUGH!). Maybe it will help guys to know that all women don't get into long foreplay and/or multiple orgasms...some of us do like a good straight-out plow now and then!!
Chapter 2 has been submitted. It's to be a four-parter, so keep an open mind everyone!
Thanks again.
Just wanted to thank sirhugs for the review & advice. I also wanted to mention comment #1 by RichardS50. He didn't like the story, which I have no problem with, and in a way I was flattered because I am a woman and I was trying to write this from a man's viewpoint/for men. Although I must admit I wouldn't mind being fucked like this (NOT BY MY BROTHER THOUGH!). Maybe it will help guys to know that all women don't get into long foreplay and/or multiple orgasms...some of us do like a good straight-out plow now and then!!
Chapter 2 has been submitted. It's to be a four-parter, so keep an open mind everyone!
Thanks again.
