Respectfully requesting some male input

[~hellbaby~]

I need some help. I've had this guy,Joe in a file since the fall and I have about 3100 words that need to be pulled together more. I keep flip flopping around and would like to see if someone can help smooth this out. I want a guys take on the character because I don't have much experience being a man,well, I don't have any experience being a man actually. If anyone can help it is greatly appreciated. I'd like to get this part fixed before I go on. There are a few typo's I am fixing but I think I've got most of them.

 

[last_hippie]

Let me give it a shot

I'm new here, but I have a way with words so let me see what I can do for you. How do you want to get it back?

 

[Matadore]

Arial7black

Hellbaby...I would be happy to respond, look at, maybe collaborate...I have been a man since I supressed my boyish nature, but that should be enough.

BBH

 

[Mark2]

male editor

Hi kid. I am on the alternate editor list as Mark2. Your query seems to be right up my alley.
Give me a msg if you want me.