Indian_Princess
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I have written short meaningless stories here and there, but Dark Seduction is practically my first story series.
I am very fond of realistic stories, and this story is close to my reality. Both the lead characters are a reflection of me and this story is very close to my heart.
Here's a link to my submissions. Dark Seduction is an 8 Chapter series.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1935127&page=submissions
Please ignore the typos. I know that the story needs editing. Some parts of the story were added/removed after I completed writing the story, I have tried my best to remove the hiccups that have arisen because of the modifications that were made later, but some may have escaped my sight. If anyone is willing to do the editing for me, please PM me.
I am basically looking for feedback regarding the plot and the sequence of events. Could it have been better? Does something feel missing? Is there any unwanted scene/information? Was there a way to make this story more realistic and thrilling? Also, please feel free to comment/give suggestions regarding anything you feel that could have been better about this story.
Also I wish to write a sequel. If you have any ideas/suggestions for the sequel please share.
Thanks.
I am very fond of realistic stories, and this story is close to my reality. Both the lead characters are a reflection of me and this story is very close to my heart.
Here's a link to my submissions. Dark Seduction is an 8 Chapter series.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1935127&page=submissions
Please ignore the typos. I know that the story needs editing. Some parts of the story were added/removed after I completed writing the story, I have tried my best to remove the hiccups that have arisen because of the modifications that were made later, but some may have escaped my sight. If anyone is willing to do the editing for me, please PM me.
I am basically looking for feedback regarding the plot and the sequence of events. Could it have been better? Does something feel missing? Is there any unwanted scene/information? Was there a way to make this story more realistic and thrilling? Also, please feel free to comment/give suggestions regarding anything you feel that could have been better about this story.
Also I wish to write a sequel. If you have any ideas/suggestions for the sequel please share.
Thanks.
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