Requesting editor's help

[kakuyaz1]

This is kakuyaz1, my first time publishing a story. I have finished part 1 of my fantasy themed story - Mishap of a Magician Girl. However, I am not confident in publishing the story, as it may still have some grammatical error, or other improvements and editing. I would be glad to have an editor who would comment on my story and suggest improvements for the story.

Genre: Fantasy, Exhibitionist, Nonhuman, Nonconsent
Word Count: 3,364

 

[Allen51566]

Glad to help

Contact me if you are seeking a reviewer still.
Not read much fantasy, but will look for errors, etc

 

[CetanAhbleza]

Fantasy? kool...

Ok, spelling error... Am willing to assist.
DCA