dmallord
Humble Hobbit
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The last story in a series I wrote had me teary-eyed as I tried to write and proofread it. I thought it was just me. However, another commenter expressed the same effect on them. With the site experiencing some issues with posting currently, I cannot figure out if it was just that good or not. I would appreciate a Forum review of the work and feedback.
It's not long. It's incest/taboo. The plot has a father-daughter returning home from a failed intervention in a long car ride. They discover a letter in the glove compartment from the deceased mother. Yeah, it has a lot of crying in it! But I would appreciate a read and critique if you have a few minutes. Thanks, Dmallord.
https://literotica.com/s/good-bye-my-love
It's not long. It's incest/taboo. The plot has a father-daughter returning home from a failed intervention in a long car ride. They discover a letter in the glove compartment from the deceased mother. Yeah, it has a lot of crying in it! But I would appreciate a read and critique if you have a few minutes. Thanks, Dmallord.
https://literotica.com/s/good-bye-my-love
