Candy_Kane54
Missing my Muse...
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I am in the process of editing a new story using Grammarly and it is making some suggestions that I find objectionable and I'd like the opinion of other authors on it.
For example, I am writing the sentence: "They had decided to hike the east end of John Bryant State Park."
Grammarly is insisting that I rewrite it as: "They had decided to hike John Bryant State Park's east end."
I disagree. Inanimate objects can't make referential statements about themselves since they are, by definition, inanimate.
Another example: "The left hand of the statue was clenched into a fist."
Grammarly wants me to change it to: "The statue's left hand was clenched into a fist."
Am I wrong? I'd like to know what you think about this. Thanks!
For example, I am writing the sentence: "They had decided to hike the east end of John Bryant State Park."
Grammarly is insisting that I rewrite it as: "They had decided to hike John Bryant State Park's east end."
I disagree. Inanimate objects can't make referential statements about themselves since they are, by definition, inanimate.
Another example: "The left hand of the statue was clenched into a fist."
Grammarly wants me to change it to: "The statue's left hand was clenched into a fist."
Am I wrong? I'd like to know what you think about this. Thanks!