Referencing...stuff!

[The Neon Wolf]

As I've been going about the next story, something kinda struck me, and for once it wasn't anything furry with teeth.

Referring to genitalia, I'm having trouble keeping things going in the story. If that makes sense, what does everyone refer that stuff to and not cheapen or overplay the story.

Thanks for any enlightenment...I'll be off worshipping the caffiene gods till something makes more sense..

 

[sirhugs]

As I've been going about the next story, something kinda struck me, and for once it wasn't anything furry with teeth.

Referring to genitalia, I'm having trouble keeping things going in the story. If that makes sense, what does everyone refer that stuff to and not cheapen or overplay the story.

Thanks for any enlightenment...I'll be off worshipping the caffiene gods till something makes more sense..

there are several excellent "How To" articles on word choice on the story index ( as opposed to the " How To" forum on the Board). I think they are also indexed under Writer's References.

May the gods be with you.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Well, my favorite word for the lady parts is "cunt". And, for men, cock. I guess I have a porno heart? lol I loathe things like "love stick" or words cheesy Harlequin novels may use!

 

[rbijon]

I love the very descriptive word....PUSSY!

....makes me hard just typing it!

 

[The Neon Wolf]

Well, my favorite word for the lady parts is "cunt". And, for men, cock. I guess I have a porno heart? lol I loathe things like "love stick" or words cheesy Harlequin novels may use!

Agreed! I've been reading various stories trying to determine what keeps the pulse of a story going. I keep laughing my ass off at some references.

there are several excellent "How To" articles on word choice on the story index ( as opposed to the " How To" forum on the Board). I think they are also indexed under Writer's References.

How the hell did I miss those, thanks!

 

[sirhugs]

Agreed! I've been reading various stories trying to determine what keeps the pulse of a story going. I keep laughing my ass off at some references.

personally, I'd rather rip the out and stomp all over it

 

[BedtimeStories77]

personally, I'd rather rip the out and stomp all over it

You Sadist you.

 

[sirhugs]

You Sadist you.

thats Dadist Sadist to you

 

[BedtimeStories77]

thats Dadist Sadist to you

lol Okay.