Red's Thread - come in and read a bit, post a bit, and lick a bit... okay... alot!!!

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Working off the idea that Pomegranates are one of the healthiest fruits for you but the drink has kick that would make you do some bad and sinful things....

Coupla options:

Forbidden Fruit
Red's Forbidden Fruit
Red's Temptation

with the tagline-"just one taste will change your world forever"
 
With Scent strung up high
My whip trails up her thigh
I flick back, the whip strikes
She can scream if she likes
'Twill bring me a pleasurable sigh.

I walk slowly round
I like seeing her bound
I smile up at her
stroking her fur
her breaths the only sound.

I lift the whip high
and let it fly
with a crack it bites deep
Scent makes not a peep
But I see a tear in her eye.

My hand soothes the burn
I push back my concern
my hand circles her neck
give a moment to reflect
Then the whip takes another turn.

Again I strike hard
then pull my trump card
I pull out my thick crop
on her rump let it drop
Making her sing like a bard.

OK...I exceeded the 50 word limit...but I should get points for creativity:D

Going to have a hard time beating that Ang. sweet:kiss:
 
With Scent strung up high
My whip trails up her thigh
I flick back, the whip strikes
She can scream if she likes
'Twill bring me a pleasurable sigh.

I walk slowly round
I like seeing her bound
I smile up at her
stroking her fur
her breaths the only sound.

I lift the whip high
and let it fly
with a crack it bites deep
Scent makes not a peep
But I see a tear in her eye.

My hand soothes the burn
I push back my concern
my hand circles her neck
give a moment to reflect
Then the whip takes another turn.

Again I strike hard
then pull my trump card
I pull out my thick crop
on her rump let it drop
Making her sing like a bard.

OK...I exceeded the 50 word limit...but I should get points for creativity:D

wow, that's fantastic!! (now which contest is this?? 50 words to flog Scent with?)
 
Working off the idea that Pomegranates are one of the healthiest fruits for you but the drink has kick that would make you do some bad and sinful things....

Coupla options:

Forbidden Fruit
Red's Forbidden Fruit
Red's Temptation

with the tagline-"just one taste will change your world forever"

Oh Forbidden Fruit sounds yummy. :D
 
Oops, forgot to mention you were the other half of WMW.;)

With Scent strung up high
My whip trails up her thigh
I flick back, the whip strikes
She can scream if she likes
'Twill bring me a pleasurable sigh.

I walk slowly round
I like seeing her bound
I smile up at her
stroking her fur
her breaths the only sound.

I lift the whip high
and let it fly
with a crack it bites deep
Scent makes not a peep
But I see a tear in her eye.

My hand soothes the burn
I push back my concern
my hand circles her neck
give a moment to reflect
Then the whip takes another turn.

Again I strike hard
then pull my trump card
I pull out my thick crop
on her rump let it drop
Making her sing like a bard.

OK...I exceeded the 50 word limit...but I should get points for creativity:D

Ohh and it rhymes!!:D
 
Working off the idea that Pomegranates are one of the healthiest fruits for you but the drink has kick that would make you do some bad and sinful things....

Coupla options:

Forbidden Fruit
Red's Forbidden Fruit
Red's Temptation

with the tagline-"just one taste will change your world forever"

Interesting choices.:)
 
well, they were just ideas. :)

Go back a couple of pages before you came. I left a picture.

Background is I had a pretty erotic dream. I shared it. It consisted of me being flogged. Angel is enthusiastic about the whip and crop. Point is being masochistic. Not submissive.
 
The light plays off your dark skin, sweat beads and runs down your body, as you hang suspended. Hungry eyes watch, devouring every inch of you, exposing all that you are to them. Tight cords bound to your ankles, pull you tight, spread wide and taut. Muscles quiver in anticipation of the leather's kiss.

57 and I deleted the good stuff cuz it was too long.
 
Go back a couple of pages before you came. I left a picture.

Background is I had a pretty erotic dream. I shared it. It consisted of me being flogged. Angel is enthusiastic about the whip and crop. Point is being masochistic. Not submissive.

Only for those I care about, of course!
 
The light plays off your dark skin, sweat beads and runs down your body, as you hang suspended. Hungry eyes watch, devouring every inch of you, exposing all that you are to them. Tight cords bound to your ankles, pull you tight, spread wide and taut. Muscles quiver in anticipation of the leather's kiss.

57 and I deleted the good stuff cuz it was too long.

Nice!
 
The light plays off your dark skin, sweat beads and runs down your body, as you hang suspended. Hungry eyes watch, devouring every inch of you, exposing all that you are to them. Tight cords bound to your ankles, pull you tight, spread wide and taut. Muscles quiver in anticipation of the leather's kiss.

57 and I deleted the good stuff cuz it was too long.


Ohh sexy Lance!
 
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