Real_First_Time - feedback page

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Hello everyone.
Ive been submitting to Literotica for a couple of years but this is my first thread in any forum here.
My current story is called Breaking jen...2nd chapter was just approved and the third is on the way.
Pretty positive responses...chapter 1 of that story had been read close to 50,000 times now and chapter two has posted 6,000 views in 12 hours.

Part three is on the way.
If anyone has an opinion on my submissions feel free to leave a comment here....its all very helpful!
 
You'll probably elicit more reasoned comments by posting your stories in the Story Discussion Circle. It would seem your first story has received considerable attention; have you received any constructive feedback?

In any case, posting links to your stories is helpful to the lazy among us who may wish to comment. ;)

Good luck with your writing. :D
 
And if you wish feedback on your stories, it's best to note that on the "Story Feedback" area of the forum--giving links to the Lit. listings.
 
There's no requirement for giving feedback here and it isn't given much of the time comparitively to the views taken. Many of the topics invite quick read and quick leave. "First time" would be one of those.
 
There's no requirement for giving feedback here and it isn't given much of the time comparitively to the views taken. Many of the topics invite quick read and quick leave. "First time" would be one of those.

Yeah, but these are in NC/R. The first part posted a year ago and the second part is still new. 50,000 views in a year is normal, and four PC is normal. The PC are quite complimentary.

ETA: I think it would be a good idea to add a final paragraph asking for feedback and suggestions.
 
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