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icy

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in the darkness i feel so bold
in this heat i feel so cold
to this reply
i tell no lie
told so whimsical
to bob and lick on the icicle.
 
Last two lines don't work...

You changed language and color using whimsicle - you're too fixated on icicle. Maybe popsicle might work in here better!!!!
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thanks for the help ag2507

the reply to my entru of real late from yesterdays thread.
 
my poor attempt, icy

in the sunlight, warmth seeps
under the sadows, icy creeps
in the eyes of the sun
the fingers are cold
coz of the icicle i hole
 
Re: ooops

duckbottomley said:
last word should be 'hold' rather than hole

Just use the edit button down below the post you have an error in. Takes you back to that post and you can redo any part of it.
 
My version of you!!!! ICY

icy said:
in the darkness i feel so bold
in this heat i feel so cold
to this reply
i tell no lie
told so whimsical
to bob and lick on the icicle.


In this darkness, in this heat
bobing and licking, on your meat
I find you hot, you feel me cold
your touch so warm, has made me bold
you search my mind, to know my nick
my reply, no lie, I answer quick
in sex I play, your thoughts I tickle
I am whimsical, a joyeous icicle!


Frank :kiss: :devil:
 
ZETACON+ ICY+DUCKBOTTOMLEY= A 3WAY SCORCHER!:devil:

You boys have been very naughty
but this lil' hottie
says: Beam me up Scottie

my pussy you'll eat
your monkies i'll beat
oh please take a seat
so hot from the heat

time to take a romp
for a fat 'Donkey' stomp

composing a riddle
while i'm in the middle

much more i could say
but i might melt away



:devil: :devil: :devil:
 
Icy, you are up pretty late,
And I can see you titilate,
We should go on a date.

A walk in the park
we will hold hands when it is dark

To recieve a kiss from your lips
I would do some back flips

Leaning you back on a chair,
I would run my hands through your hair,
And begin to stare

At your magnificently shaped body
You sure are one hottie! (not a true rhyme, but you get the meaning.)

Sugardaddy
:devil:

Sorry, my poetry is a tad lacking. :eek:
 
my sugardaddy

sweetie your efforts are great and you shouldnt be shy about that...your still my big daddy and i am ready for our stroll in the
park..after dark
:D :kiss:
 
Icy, i will stroll with you any where. just tell me where to pick you up and we can go to the nearest park. ;)

Sugardaddy:kiss:
 
:kiss: Daddy, you are so sweet. i think i am going to get a toothache:p
 
well, i do have lots of candy in my pockets so i guess i could be sweet. ;) And if anything hurts, i could kiss it and make it feel better. :devil:

Sugardaddy
 
hey sugar daddy..what time is it where you are at:confused:
 
night time. lol. it is 135 am. I am in Washington DC
Why do you ask my dear? Cold, need me to warm you up my Icy dear?

Sugardaddy
 
Shining Eyes....

ShiningEyes said:
Very nice, Frank! *S* You guys are very talented!

Might I have the pleasure of getting to know you enough to write some nice rhimes about you?
I have read many of your posts, and I find much to adore in you.
You could have me writing most anything...Just say the word.
After all, your most erotic part of you is your brain. So let me appeal to that with mine.
:kiss: :rose:
 
Icy!!!

I adore your whimsy! I could write even more with your help.
Could you give me something to inspire me????
What would happen if your ice met my heat???
Would that be a good topic for another poem?
:p :kiss:
 
My inspiration

zetacon4~zetacon4~zetacon4

Collision of the elements: when ice meets the heat...i hope you
can work with that my lovely....:kiss:
 
Might I have the pleasure of getting to know you enough to write some nice rhimes about you? I have read many of your posts, and I find much to adore in you.
You could have me writing most anything...Just say the word.
After all, your most erotic part of you is your brain. So let me appeal to that with mine.

I would love to get to know you better! :heart: :kiss: And would be honored to have something written by you about me or inspired by me!! You seem like a very very sweet person! Thank you! With your talent for writing and rhyming, I'd like most anything you write!
 
cool down

ice cold on warm breast
put the temperature to the test
icicle on hot cock
no melt down hard as a rock



*enjoying this thread veeery much everyone!* ;)
 
Ice Cold

Down the body
An Icy touch
can you stand it
or is it too much?

Moans of passion
for one so bold
who needs the heat
when you have Ice Cold. :cool:
 
Re: Ice Cold

Ice Cold said:
Down the body
An Icy touch
can you stand it
or is it too much?

Moans of passion
for one so bold
who needs the heat
when you have Ice Cold. :cool:

mmmmmmmm baby!!!!!! you know i want it Ice Cold!!!!! let me melt you the way you melt me ;)

awesome lil diddy from you babe :kiss:
 
Icy, baby...As promised...Your ice, my fire!

Summers' Hot Chill
------------------------------------------------------
For the coolest girl I know!!.... Icy

The night was hot, as I lay dreaming
of a woman so light and free
for my heart, she is scheming
in my soul, she wished to see.

As I dreamt, I felt a chill
in the air, a small form gleaming
like an angel, on window sill
moonlight beams, from sky was streaming.

Without sound, she hovered ore me
and her kisses on my lips
like a phantom without body
pulled me up from dreams' eclipse.

From night's heat, my form was beaded
no respite found, I tossed and turned
quietly she nestled, as if intreated
her glowing form, like embers burned

The warmth receded, I felt a thrill
our mouths and tongues intwined
Her body trembled, I held her still
Our thoughts in lust combined.

Her words, now whispered near my chest
to urge me on, to give assurance
my hand she guided, to her breast
so nipple I tweaked , her passion to enhance.

I was so hot, she was so cold
our bodies pressed together hard
she found my meat, her hips were bold
her love nest decended on me downward.

My rod was steel, her cunt was ice
the sparks and flames were just a starter
my balls she played, and cupped like dice
I thumbed her clit, and pumped her even harder.

Through cries of joy, she came upon me
my growls of lust arose deep within
her icy soul was now a squishy,
My fire, now waned, shall burn again!
:p :kiss: :heart:
 
Reply~~~~Very Flattered~~~

:eek: I feel like such a warm sensation inside after reading your thread <zetacon4>

:rose: :rose: :rose: :heart: :heart: :kiss: :kiss:
~~Feeling lost in my own skin~~~
 
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