Readin' and Yet Mo' Writin's.

[Joe Wordsworth]

I'm camped at the bookstore (its my day off, so I am making myself /not/ go to the office and work). Who gots some stuff for me to read and comment? I kinda like doing that.

 

[English Lady]

I'm camped at the bookstore (its my day off, so I am making myself /not/ go to the office and work). Who gots some stuff for me to read and comment? I kinda like doing that.

I posted it on ya yesterday's thread this morning but not sure if you sawit or not, but my latest lit piece is up :


Seasonal Exposure

It's only a short'un.

Thanks

 

[galaxygoddess]

comment on:

my little fairy part 2

And I'll love you forever.

Seriously, I was really concerned with the scene being too... vague. Is it to vague? I have a hard time using more... descriptive and obvious words lol. NOt because I don't know how to describe it, it's just certain words I'm not found of using.



Also, does adding some "conversation" ruin or add to it? I was wondering about that. I got kind of "in the zone" while writing and that made it;s way there before I could stop it, and taking it out made it read weird so I left it.

 

[Joe Wordsworth]

Read it... groovy groovoy

 

[English Lady]

Read it... groovy groovoy

Mine? If so I claim the typo as a sign of just how much you liked it

 

[Joe Wordsworth]

comment on:

my little fairy part 2

And I'll love you forever.

Seriously, I was really concerned with the scene being too... vague. Is it to vague? I have a hard time using more... descriptive and obvious words lol. NOt because I don't know how to describe it, it's just certain words I'm not found of using.



Also, does adding some "conversation" ruin or add to it? I was wondering about that. I got kind of "in the zone" while writing and that made it;s way there before I could stop it, and taking it out made it read weird so I left it.

Dialogue is often overdone. I liked it. I thought it said much without having to be so explicit. Good stuff.

 

[galaxygoddess]

Dialogue is often overdone. I liked it. I thought it said much without having to be so explicit. Good stuff.

Thank you! That's incredibly helpful!

 

[TxRad]

The three new stories in my sig are doing fairly well in voting but not to well in comments.... I'm not sure if there's nothing to say about them or if it's just the summer doldrums.....

 

[Joe Wordsworth]

The three new stories in my sig are doing fairly well in voting but not to well in comments.... I'm not sure if there's nothing to say about them or if it's just the summer doldrums.....

Done and done.

 

[Vermilion]

Done and done.

what kind of stuff do you enjoy reading most Joe?
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[Joe Wordsworth]

what kind of stuff do you enjoy reading most Joe?
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Things that are very "rawr". I'm a bit jaded, really, for the most part. It takes a bit more kink to grab my attention than it used to years ago.

 

[TxRad]

Well Joe, if ya want a roller coaster, try my story "wet".....

Wet


And thanks for the good comments....

 

[Vermilion]

Things that are very "rawr". I'm a bit jaded, really, for the most part. It takes a bit more kink to grab my attention than it used to years ago.

Mine are probably a bit vanilla for you then, though my incest ones seems popular. Oh well, drop by if you fancy it, but I won;t hold you to it.
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[Joe Wordsworth]

Mine are probably a bit vanilla for you then, though my incest ones seems popular. Oh well, drop by if you fancy it, but I won;t hold you to it.
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You had a /lot/ of stuff.