Reader(s) wanted

[Rod Hardwick]

Hello all. I'm almost finished with a new story, and would like one or more people to read it over before I submit it. I considered a volunteer editor, but I don't feel as though I need much help in the grammar department, as I am rather proficient with such matters. I'm also not interested in artistic content, as that's not why I write stories. Basically, I don't consider this "erotic literature," but more like written pornography. The characters and situations are not particularly believable, but I don't particularly care, as, in general, my goal is not to so much to enlighten, inform, or provoke intellectual discourse, but is, in fact, to tell the sorts of stories my wife likes to read, and thereby get her extremely horny so I can have nasty sex with her.

The story is about a college-aged girl who is coerced into having sex with several men. There isn?t much force, but some humiliation. I currently do not have a title. The work is about 15 pages long, single spaced, 10 point font. I think when it appears on Literotica it would consume about four pages. I plan to submit it to the Group Sex category in about two weeks.

Mainly, I would like to know, "Is this story hot? Is it descriptive enough? Can you think of any things I should add or remove to further arouse the reader?"

If you would like to read my story for me, please either post here or email rodhardwick@hotmail.com. Be sure to tell me what in which document format you would prefer to read it. Thanks!

 

[Weird Harold]

I'm also not interested in artistic content, as that's not why I write stories.
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Mainly, I would like to know, "Is this story hot? Is it descriptive enough? Can you think of any things I should add or remove to further arouse the reader?"

The work is about 15 pages long, single spaced, 10 point font. I think when it appears on Literotica it would consume about four pages.

You say you're not interested in "artistic content" but you are asking for a "story edit" -- Whatever you choose to call it, you're asking for a critique on the "artistic content" -- or at least so it seems to me.

Most Volunteer editors -- if they respond at all -- will respect your requests on the level of editing.

FWIW, One Lit page is approximately 3,500-4,000 words.

 

[Guest]

I'm a leading reader, yo. You can figure out how to contact me.

If your story is rubbish, I tell you so.

If your story is good, I tell you so, too.

 

[Coolville]

I'll give it a bash, Wod Rodhick.

I'll drop you an email.