Read my first chapter

[bethtgirl]

Hello

I want someone to read Chapter One of my new novel Needle. It is my fifth novel but my first try at writing erotic material. Will anyone volunteer?

The story is about a detective called Sam Corsaire who lives and works in the Bronx in about 1940. He is of course a Private Investigator and he has lots of sex.

Thanks
Beth (male)

 

[sr71plt]

Read it, and then what?

 

[EquinoxRising]

You mention four previous novels... Are you a Lit author or planning to be? Is this for something off site?