Raping Chantel/Chantel's Revenge

[scorpiosting]

I have just submitted a new story. I have never written anything in this genre before.

The idea for this story came from a newspaper article that I read. The names of the characters in this story were never part of the newspaper article.

I am not sure if I will write a piece like this again, but I would love feedback.

I am specifically looking for feedback concerning the dialog.

Here is the link to the story, however it has not been added yet to any category as it is pending.

http://members.literotica.com:81/members/submissions_submit_story.php?storyid=103007

 

[CWatson]

Well, we can't read it while it's pending.