Rant!

[Dar~]

IF you are going to leave me a low vote and comment, tell me who you are. That way I can ask you what you would have done, and thereby improve my writing. Don't just lower my score. Also, this is fucking porn, if you can't suspend reality for five fucking seconds then don't read it. HELLO thats why its called Fiction!!!

 

[logophile]

IF you are going to leave me a low vote and comment, tell me who you are. That way I can ask you what you would have done, and thereby improve my writing. Don't just lower my score. Also, this is fucking porn, if you can't suspend reality for five fucking seconds then don't read it. HELLO thats why its called Fiction!!!

Having a bad night, Dar?
Is there anything I can do to help?

 

[Dar~]

Having a bad night, Dar?
Is there anything I can do to help?

Not a bad nihgt, just hoping htat whoever gave my story a low score is out there b/c I can't get better unless I get feedback. I am actually in a really good mood.

 

[Liar]

When you get reads that go past the thousand, it's statisticaly impossible to avoid that some of them are dumber than manure. It's the way of life, let it slide, dear.

 

[Shadowskill Knight]

Not a bad nihgt, just hoping htat whoever gave my story a low score is out there b/c I can't get better unless I get feedback. I am actually in a really good mood.

Yes, its rather difficult to improve one's writing without knowing what needs to be worked on.

 

[maggot420]

I really liked it Dar.

 

[Dar~]

I really liked it Dar.

You are so good to me Maggot, I may have to let you lick my boots sometime

 

[maggot420]

You are so good to me Maggot, I may have to let you lick my boots sometime

don't tell anyone im good to you...i dont want to ruin my reputation.
boots might be a good change for me. licking out dumpsters just doesnt have the thrill it once did.

 

[Dar~]

don't tell anyone im good to you...i dont want to ruin my reputation.
boots might be a good change for me. licking out dumpsters just doesnt have the thrill it once did.

You make me laugh!

 

[maggot420]

You make me laugh!

i seem to have that effect on women

 

[OhMissScarlett]

Dar, I just read and voted for you. Good stuff. When I read your feedback, it looked like you picked up one of the standard trolls who usually lurks around the "Loving Wives" stories. Imagine the sort of life one must not have to sit around and think up such comments.

 

[Dar~]

Dar, I just read and voted for you. Good stuff. When I read your feedback, it looked like you picked up one of the standard trolls who usually lurks around the "Loving Wives" stories. Imagine the sort of life one must not have to sit around and think up such comments.

Whats funny is that they aren't married, the couple is just living together.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Agreed with Scarlett. I very much enjoyed the final version - RVC'd you - and noticed "George's" PC. Well, at least we now know the name of one of the morons who trolls "loving wives" every time the wife in question doesn't put out like a bunny for her husband, mop the floors and bake him cinnamon rolls in her spare time, and catch a lethal sexual disease if she ever dares to cheat on him. I dub thee all "Georges" and hope that you meet some seriously armor-plated dragons.

Nice work, Dar.

Shanglan