Random Resume Question

[BiBunny]

This is a totally non-BDSM subject, but I'm asking here because I know we have people who are smart about such things.

I've completely re-done Kitty's resume. She is going to talk to someone about a job she really wants tomorrow. However, there's one thing about it that's bugging me. I won't bore everyone with details; instead, I'd appreciate it if anyone with a bit of expertise in the writing field would PM me.

MWY? Sir W? Keroin? Anybody? Thanks bunches.