Quiet Streets (Official Thread)

[brevdravis]

Ok, I'm getting a bit more ambitious with my second story.

It's immersive, 2nd person, male and female.

The story starts with your character in the basement of a mall, having been there for several days. At this point you get to choose either male or female, and away we go.

Not approved yet, but can't wait to get started on this one.

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Aaaargh, Just noticed that stories were approved earlier today.

What is it with me and posting my new stuff right AFTER the deadline....

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Okay, Quiet Streets is up and RUNNING!

The story has gotten under way, with the male player given an opportunity to play galahad, and the female player an opportunity to shop.....

(Well not really, just having fun with it. Hmm, maybe I should borrow oookitty's mall layout..........

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Thank You Dacia!

The first thread that was submitted has the male character checking out a scream in a scene John Woo would be proud of.

Many thanks Dacia, I owe you a thread, but not today, because I'm late for a tournament....

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Okay, because of a few threads which I've rejected, I feel a word of thanks is necessary to all those who wrote in to me.

It's nothing personal, I'm just being VERY picky on this story. I want it too be perfect, and a few of the ideas I've received are good, but aren't what I'm looking for. Please don't take it personal, but because of my pledge to write a thread for anyone who writes, I'm being a bit bullheaded...

I promise to personally add at least one thread Monday through Friday. I've given up on Book of Magic, so any new material I produce for my own stories will be going to this one.

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Many thanks to Jakelyon for the newest thread in Quiet Streets.

The male character is given an opportunity to atone for chickening out earlier, and saves another person in peril.

Check it out! I'm not including a detailed walkthrough yet because the story is fairly small and it's easy to find.

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

2 More threads today....
Both for the Female protagonist, detailing how she deals with a nasty situation, and a visit to the outside of the mall.

Both by me, but hey, I'm having fun with this story. I'm really happy with the number of hits my story is getting, so if anybody has any specific requests for what they would like to see me write, feel free to post it here. There are a few things I won't do, but I've been pretty clear in the past what I don't like, so don't panic.

No threads given for ideas, tho, sorry.

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Another thread, this time detailing the main character meeting a lovely gal in the dark.

Getting close to actual sex on all the threads, so you all keep close.

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Despite ratings sabotage by some people with way too much time on their hands, Quiet Streets is still up and running!

Many thanks go out to Jakelyon, for a great thread coming off his last one. He's got a great new take on the virus, and it makes for an interesting read.

I'm planning on adding at least one thread today, so keep a look out for it.

Still looking for contributers. Sure the story hasn't had any major sex scenes yet, but if you would like a little plot with your sex, check it out.

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

More threads today, blah blah blah, check it out, blah blah blah, female meets up with another survivor, blah blah blah....

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Another day, another new thread!

This story is just taking off!

Niceguy2002tim follows up Dacia's thread with a well executed exodus from the mall. Thanks!

I owe you a thread, but not today, because I'm already late getting out the door.

Stuart

 

[rusty69]

brevdravis -

Sorry to be a bill-collector, but I'm still kind of hoping to see a submission for my story from you in return for that thread I wrote for your Book of Magic story - I submitted it a while ago, before you said you were more-or-less discontinuing it.

Thanks.

 

[brevdravis]

Thanks for reminding me.

I'll get on it today...

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Great new thread from Dacia following up on Niceguy's thread.

Another great action sequence from Dacia, making me wonder if she moonlights as an stuntwoman.

Thanks again Dacia, and I hope my last couple threads for you were payment enough....

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

1st sex scene!

Okay, I did it.

It's still under construction but....

Not only is it my first sex scene written for my own story, but.....

It's also the first pure lesbian scene I've written for Chyoo...

Check it out, it's on the female path and you can't miss it. It'll be updated every day this week at least a thread a day.

Stuart

 

[Zingiber]

And for the lazy...

A link to your story, for lazy people like me...

Quiet Streets

- Zingiber

 

[brevdravis]

Another thread from Dacia, following up on her last.

Jeez, if you guys keep up this support I'm going to have to start posting walkthroughs soon....

Not that that's a bad thing...

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Another day, more threads.

Just so everybody knows. There are two choices on every thread up to three pages deep. After that, it gets a little splotchy, but I'm trying to fill the story out instead of long....

Good submissions welcome, once again.

Stuart

 

[jakelyon]

Truth is stranger than fiction

In today's sunday paper there was the following story:

Health Agency Probes Mysterious Illness

By DANIEL YEE
Associated Press Writer


ATLANTA (AP) -- Federal health officials said Sunday they are analyzing samples from a mysterious pneumonia-like illness that has afflicted more than 150 people in seven countries and caused nine deaths. Doctors hope to have initial results from testing early this week.

Officials also are handing out information cards to travelers from countries where the disease has appeared, asking them to see a doctor if they experience symptoms such as high fever or respiratory problems.

"This is an evolving problem," Dr. Julie Gerberding, director of the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, said Sunday. "We want to keep our mind to new information as we learn more."

No cases had been identified Sunday in the United States, although the CDC had received calls about potential cases that are being investigated, Gerberding said.

Two people who had been in this country are believed to have developed the mysterious illness. A doctor from Singapore was taken off a New York-to-Singapore flight in Germany on Saturday and quarantined, and a woman, hospitalized in Canada with similar symptoms, had traveled to Atlanta on business shortly before becoming ill.

Little is known about the disease, called Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome.

More than a week after it began appearing, health officials still didn't know if it was a virus or bacteria. CDC officials said it appears to affect only those in close contact with infected people - family members and health care workers - from afflicted areas, countries that include China, Indonesia, Philippines, Singapore, Thailand and Vietnam.

Gerberding said doctors are unsure whether antibiotics or antiviral drugs have an effect on the disease since they have not been consistently used in the areas with the most cases.

Although the CDC is keeping "an open mind" about bioterrorism, Gerberding said the mystery illness appears to be naturally occurring.

"Right now, it's an issue for travelers returning from parts of Asia, we're not seeing a spread" in the United States, Gerberding said Sunday. "We've taken steps to put the health system on alert."

Gerberding said the CDC is working to get more samples for its labs to analyze. Tests could take several days, but officials said they hope to have initial results ready by early this week.

The CDC's emergency operations center - which previously handled the 2001 anthrax attacks and last year's explosion of the West Nile virus - has been activated to coordinate a multinational effort in learning about the new disease.



Now if that does not make your story king of creepy I don't know what does.

 

[brevdravis]

Ack. And a new thread from Ooohkitty too......

Nice little thread going over some of the older ground in the female path. Check it out.

I am officially scared. I'm also checking out local mall basements....

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Two new threads by Jakelyon!

They're on the male path, and involve his previous story. Another opportunity to play hero is presenting itself.

Woah. Talk about major support for this story. I owe ya two Jake!

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Whoo hoo! TWO new threads from Gystex, both on the female path.

Both of them detail decisions made by the protagonist and a woman that she finds.

They were a lot of fun to read, and they're pretty easy to find. Next time, I'll post a walkthrough, because the story's getting too big!

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Buncha new threads today, all by me!

WHoo hoo! Once again I'm trying to fill out the story rather than make it too long. I'm thinking about starting a few "The End" threads, because we have a lot of fun options, and I don't want the story to get too spread out.

Soooooo, I'm taking suggestions on which storylines you don't want to see go on any more, and how you'd like to see them end.

Stuart

 

[brevdravis]

Current Character list...

For all of those who want to add, here are the various characters that are present throughout the story so far. I do realize the irony of more female characters than male characters, since the virus in this story supposedly kills more women then men, but hey, it's porn... For the most part, the men in the story are faceless bad guys.

The Immersive Character Either male or female. A lucky survivor who hid in a mall. Suffering from slight insomnia. Can be either very good or very evil depending on the choices made.

Officer Eddie A man who claims to be a cop. Rather big and brutish, looks like a Soprano's extra.

Amanda A woman with Short Blonde hair. Well proportioned, and attractive. Extremely lonely, and frightened by the men roaming the city. Definately has feelings for women, her feelings for men haven't been defined yet.

Brittney A stunning blonde with an extremely generous chest area. Rescued from a rapist by the main character. Sister of Erin.

Erin A petite redhead with the same enhanced features as her sister Brittney. Has been raped but is saved afterwords by the main character.

The Man Victim of a fire at Brittney and Erin's former home. Not described yet.

Tomi A very thin woman with almost no breasts. Has dark hair, and slim features. Helps the main character fight off some dogs. Rather Traumatized by past events.

Ray An older blond haired man. About the same height and weight as the protagonist. Seems to be in charge of a small group of men.

Johnnie A large man, rather brutish. Has dark hair. Follows the orders of Ray. Rapist.

Jack Another blonde man about the same size as the protagonist. Carries a shotgun and has a nasty sense of humor. Also a rapist.

The Blonde A voluptious woman, who has been captured by Ray's gang. Nothing is really known about her yet.

The Colonel A mysterious character who has only been referred to by Eddie and Ray. Has not made an appearance, but I suspect he's the "Law" in this nasty future.

Gwen A slender woman with red hair. Has pleasant curves, and is fairly trusting. At the start of the story, she is still a virgin.

Megan Gwen's lost friend. Dead....(As far as we know.)

Terry A very toned, muscular woman with short dark hair, and nice breasts. Very untrusting of men in general, but not a complete dyke. An ex-police officer.

Kim A flirtatious woman with long brown hair. Rather slender, and not very voluptuous.

AAAAND That's it! There will be other characters of course. I'm kinda hoping to introduce a lot more men, simply to make the story work out right. (However, I expect most of them will fall under the Gratuitous Badguy category...)

Stuart

 

[niceguy2002tim]

A world with a small population?

Wow,
that's quite a character list. So far this story has turned out really well, even in this time period with Chyoo being in a slump right now. I haven't had a chance to read every path of the story, I mainly have stuck to the one I have added to. I was wondering if anybody has included a long term goal for the surivor. Does he or she have a destination yet? Has a clear path been laid out yet? or is everything still too messy right now?

Also, I just submitted a thread for the story... hoping it'll be number 50. As of this far I've never wrote any big milestone threads, that I know of.

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)