quick edit - erotic horror

[Selena_Kitt]

It's only 1900 words... and I'm pretty good with spelling/grammar etc...

just want a quick run-through and an opinion... it's really pretty horrific...

 

[Guest]

It's only 1900 words... and I'm pretty good with spelling/grammar etc...

just want a quick run-through and an opinion... it's really pretty horrific...

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I'll look at it, Selena. Just got done with Mr. Appleby's.

E-mail to my yahoo address.

Manxy,

 

[rozezwild]

It's only 1900 words... and I'm pretty good with spelling/grammar etc...

just want a quick run-through and an opinion... it's really pretty horrific...

If you dont have ti dont -- My door is always open to you sweetie

 

[LadyCibelle]

Me me..meeeeee Me too....me tooo. I want a slice of you too Selena.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Me me..meeeeee Me too....me tooo. I want a slice of you too Selena.

It's up already ... thanks Manx, and Rogue...

I'll give it up to you next, Lady... when you're feeling all better, that is...

 

[rozezwild]

It's up already ... thanks Manx, and Rogue...

I'll give it up to you next, Lady... when you're feeling all better, that is...

Baby -- that was great -- love it