Putting out her fire

[MrTryItOnce]

I have an idea for a story where the captain of the firehouse meets a 18 year old girl that has a thing for firemen. Her and the captain set it up so she is stuck in a elevator in a building that is closed after 12 at night. When the truck arrives she is naked in the elevator playing with herself. The captain walks in calmly n asked her what is she goin to do and she says whatever he wants. He ravishes her first then hand her over to the fellas. The captain should be a older 50 or up mans man and the rest of the guys run the range of looks n nationalities. About 8 additional fire fighters n the two cops that always show up with the fire truck as an added bonus to her.

 

[RuzieD]

Nice, somewhat predatory, set up. Here are some thoughts?

Why does the girl masturbate when she's stuck in the elevator? It strikes me as a pretty random thing to do in a situation that is somewhat claustrophobic, uncertain, and scary.

How long does she wait there?

How does the fireman know that he will be the one to answer the emergency call?

 

[Sean Renaud]

It's a set up Ruzie. The better question is why they didn't just bring the girl in for a nice gang bang. I think my initial reaction to a girl getting off in a stalled elevator would be "shit she's nuts"

 

[MrTryItOnce]

I was thinkin the girl and the fire chief knew what was goin on so that's why she is playing with herself, in anticipation. Also the fire house was closest to the building so that's why they got the call but another firehouse getting the call could be a twist. Maybe like a "controlled coincidence" (makes sense in my mind). I kind of have it written out in my mind but I'm a beginning writer workin on my first two stories and would like to see one of my ideas fleshed out first to compare my others to but if u would just like to see me write this one out I will make it my first story. Would love to see a writer with a great imagination do this though. Also there are tons of gangbang stories on here just want to set up something different that can be real but a little bit of a stretch. That's why it's more of a fantasy.

 

[RuzieD]

I was thinkin the girl and the fire chief knew what was goin on so that's why she is playing with herself, in anticipation.

That is totally believable. So does she get herself stuck there on purpose? Whose idea is it? Maybe the fireman is reluctant, but she calls the station directly.

 

[GorgeousGeekGirl]

I'm all up for the fireman angle, I've had a thing for firemen since before 9-11. I do have a few alternate ideas though:

Not an 18 year old and someone old enough to be her father. Women over college age do have sex you know... And we are better at it. I got chatted up online by a 20 year old rookie who was specifically cougar hunting.

A guy dating a lady fire fighter. Those women are built like brick houses, and some guys would think it's hot to be the plaything of an amazon.

Woman very grateful to the brave fireman/men who saved her.

Firemen holding a fundraiser, woman gives her phone number with a donation. Or, woman buys a date with a fireman at a charity auction