psychological paranormal thriller...with some sex in it.

[Guest]

Okay, I have not posted this story to Lit yet becayse it is a work in progress and nowhere near finished. It is on my website for now and I have a bit of writer's block.

If someone would be so kind as to check out the story and tell me how it is going, that might help. Am I on the right track? Is it interesting? Help please!

http://thevision.ws/maralily/story_connamara.html

The story is divided into short chapters there. I hope you enjoy it. Any feedback either here or on my guestbook would be appriciated.

Here is the link to my front page, if you wish to check that out as well.

http://thevision.ws/maralily/home.html

 

[Sateema Lunasi]

heh...why am I a guest...I have been here for a year.

heh...why am I a guest...I have been here for a year.

 

[Sateema Lunasi]

shit...my full name...awe forget it...

fuck.


forget this please.


Uh...go check out my story.