Proofreader needed for a lesbian BDSM story ...

[shecret]

I spent a few months looking for an editor to help me with my stories. I got a few advices and tried to mend things myself. I don't think it is good enough, so I need a little help.
I have uploaded two chapters so far - take a look at them and if you've got a bit of time, I would be glad to hear your opinion, and if it is possible for you to proofread further chapters, I would be the happiest guy in town.
My stories are here:
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2984260&page=submissions

Thanks.
Shecret

 

[UnpublishedEroticaWriter]

You should try the volunteer editors if you haven't already. You will have a much better chance of getting a reply.

 

[shecret]

You should try the volunteer editors if you haven't already. You will have a much better chance of getting a reply.

Thanks - I have tried that and had to ask several before I got a bit help. It is volunteer work - and quite time-consumimg, so I settled for assistance from Grammarly. I think it is ok for now - not perfect, but close. I have learnt a lot in the process, and I am getting more and more fluent. New versions are uploaded and I have chapter 6 on the tinker table right now - to be uploaded in a few days, I hope.