problem

[juanjsojr]

oh ok

thank I'll try

 

[Samandiriel]

Nah...just be general and sorta vague. Use things from the environtment instead of numbers and it's not a problem...people really don't like reading numbers anyway.

exactly, its all in the description and the mood.

 

[impressive]

And make sure you include description for each of the senses. For the ripeness of the fruit: is it squishy and bruised like an apple that's been dropped too many times? Does it smell funky like a canteloupe left in the sun? Is it hairy like a kiwi? Fuzzy like a peach? Does it scratch like pineapple? Melt in your mouth like a cheese blintz?

 

[Nirvanadragones]

And make sure you include description for each of the senses. For the ripeness of the fruit: is it squishy and bruised like an apple that's been dropped too many times? Does it smell funky like a canteloupe left in the sun? Is it hairy like a kiwi? Fuzzy like a peach? Does it scratch like pineapple? Melt in your mouth like a cheese blintz?

What she said

 

[kendo1]

is what hairy like a kiwi please tell me is it another kind of fruit or something else maybe that i don't know about and Hi Juan good to see you back again
I hear you may be writing another story

ken

 

[Tom Collins]

And make sure you include description for each of the senses. For the ripeness of the fruit: is it squishy and bruised like an apple that's been dropped too many times? Does it smell funky like a canteloupe left in the sun? Is it hairy like a kiwi? Fuzzy like a peach? Does it scratch like pineapple? Melt in your mouth like a cheese blintz?

PMSL...If my boobs were doing any of those things I'd run, not walk, to my doctor!!

 

[juanjsojr]

ok

thanks

 

[juanjsojr]

thanks all

for your help right now I'm so busy with work who knows when I start on a second chapter on lifetime love or on a new story but thanks for your help