Prison Seduction.

[jessy19]

being a girl, it's hard to write a male on male story. I had this wild idea of doing a prison seduction story.

I wanted to do two best friends (about 19 years old or so) they are both straight but get sent to prison for grand theft or soemthing like that. IN prison, in order not to get killed, or beat up..the guys make the two friends get it on...what do you all think?

 

[Seattle Zack]

I'm writing a women-in-prison story right now, trying to make it kind of campy, like the old 70's movies. Food fights, lesbian shower scenes, the sadistic warden, the gurard using them as prostitutes, all that stuff.

 

[sirhugs]

gee...you too could trade drafts...read each other's for POV check.

Both sound interesting...zack's could be fun.

jessy....not sure: a) why the other guys want to force them to do each other
b) why we believe this protects them
c) not being into gay male, how do you make it sexy?

 

[jessy19]

Well I'm a huge fan of gay erotica. I know it's weird that I'm a girl and love gay stuff but I just do *s*

I think forcing these guys to be together would be hot and then at the end they love it. ...they decide to be with each other as lovers not friends anymore..i wanted to make them hot preppy college boys that always did the right thing until one mistake that lands them in jail...i kinda wanted to make it like a series but not sure yet...

 

[sirhugs]

Well I'm a huge fan of gay erotica. I know it's weird that I'm a girl and love gay stuff but I just do *s*

I think forcing these guys to be together would be hot and then at the end they love it. ...they decide to be with each other as lovers not friends anymore..i wanted to make them hot preppy college boys that always did the right thing until one mistake that lands them in jail...i kinda wanted to make it like a series but not sure yet...

but the 'why' is crucial.....

 

[jessy19]

Well I guess you could say the guys want to force them to do each other as a way of humiliation

If they don't comply, they will get beat up or hurt so they do as they are told...does that answer ur question?

 

[sirhugs]

Well I guess you could say the guys want to force them to do each other as a way of humiliation

If they don't comply, they will get beat up or hurt so they do as they are told...does that answer ur question?

ok, I mizundersood earler. I get it now. At first, its nonconsent, then they find they like it?

 

[jessy19]

Yup non consent and then they go wild!

 

[Colleen Thomas]

If you intend to draw it out some you might consider first having them both made into a prisoners "bitch". After some escapades you could then have the two of them forced to perfom for others entertainment. Then you could shift the setting (perhaps being moved from a max to a medium prison and have them end up as cellmates in the new prison). Perhaps here no one is forcing them to do anything but they both miss the release and neither is quite sure how to broach the subject with the other?

-Colly

 

[Hooper_X]

Well I guess you could say the guys want to force them to do each other as a way of humiliation

If they don't comply, they will get beat up or hurt so they do as they are told...does that answer ur question?

They'd probably get beaten up any way it went, perhaps even having their teeth knocked out so they can give better blow jobs. Also, once punked, they'd have little time for cuddling with each other as they'd have to service any number of men.

I like the idea of a non-consentual prison story though, even a seduction story. If I were to attempt to write this kind of story, it would be about how a young new-fish was tricked into being some old wolf's bitch. He'd think the old convict was his buddy and was watching his back, but at the first opportunity, the old wolf would beat him, bend him over a table, tie him up, and then bust his bu-hymen!

 

[Akito01]

It seems to me we're kind of presuming this all takes place in the American prison system. What if the two principle characters are Americans who have become prisoners in another country -the kind of stereotypically dirty country where the guards would be the ones to force them to have sex as a kind of torture, and where, without the ability to understand the language or culture, the two lads have only each other to console one another.

 

[sweetnpetite]

Romantic Angle

I saw a movie about two guys who were friends who both ended up in the same prison (eventually) The one who had been there longer tried to make a move on his friend, but he was like 'dude- your my friend, what the fuck?"

BUT I think it would make a great story. The one friend has been there longer, he know how things work. The second guy has been writing to his buddy, promising him to stay out of trouble, but something happens, he can't aviod it and ends up in the pen, with his friend. His friend puts his hand over his and tells him that they can confort each other, it's been so long since he's even seen a woman, they are all that each other has, he can potect him.... Maybe he resists, but then maybe he gets a taste of how rough it can be without someone who really cares about him. He doesnt' become anyones bitch specifically, but just gets punked on in general. Or maybe he does become someones bitch and his friend has to come up with a way to get him away from the guy, by fighting him, or trading something, or whatever. But I think it would be good if he just said no to his friend and then got a scare that quickly drove him into his arms. I guess there are a few ways you could go with this angle.

 

[jessy19]

Akito and sweet Both of you gave me some wonderful ideas! thank you! I just gotta get this story together somehow...*s*