I dont know if this is where to "come find you" as you say. I would like to talk to you and get some of your feedback. I wrote "Local Roomie Makes Good". You suggested more detail, etc. I totally agree, but the thing is, that version is the one I sent to another site that requires it to be about 2 and a half pages. My original version was 7 and a half! I agree though - the edited bs loses so much, thusly ending up sounding like "a 15 year old...".
I am re-working another one that I have and I think it's going to be reeeally hot.
I'm not sure I agree with the prick/dick vs cock thing. The former are both so 8th-grade to me, and I always see cock in stories.
well I hope you see this and contact me. I'm going to save this in case it's totally wrong and I need to write you again.
btw: what have you written? btw-also: Thanks for the good review!
cheers,
amante
I am re-working another one that I have and I think it's going to be reeeally hot.
I'm not sure I agree with the prick/dick vs cock thing. The former are both so 8th-grade to me, and I always see cock in stories.
well I hope you see this and contact me. I'm going to save this in case it's totally wrong and I need to write you again.
btw: what have you written? btw-also: Thanks for the good review!
cheers,
amante
