Pretend That You Know

satindesire

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so in other words...
it's just a game to you
a look, just a glance and you think
"I know her"
or "I know what she wants"
and you hurt me when you say you can't love
that your desire stings fangs in my throat
and you drink my blood like wine

and you pretend that you know
what love is

so in other words...
your ego is a pawn, fleshborn fantasy body in faeborn life
immortal, perhaps? Are you even real?
and my life seems so small to you, doesn't it?
but you need me
because you drink my blood like wine

and you pretend that you know
what death is

so in other words...
that you're using me and you hate me
love me because you need me
hate me becasue you love me
and kill me because I live
but only for you
and you can drink my blood like wine
but you'll never own my soul

and you pretend you know
what life is

so go on and pretend you know
what life is
 
You have some really good lines in your poem. I very much like "desire stings fangs in my throat" and "fleshborn fantasy body in faeborn life." Stick around and write more if you like. There's a lot of good poetry and discussion on the forum, both here and in the Hangout.
 
I agree, there are some good lines. I look forward to reading more of your work.
 
I agree, there are some good lines. I look forward to reading more of your work.

She turned out to be a guy and his boyfriend found out about it.

He's in the process of deleting all of his posts right now.
 
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