Pressure Builds

[PoeticTongue23228]

Pressure builds, as I lay on naked beds. Pulsating heads, as I wrap my thoughts around you, slowing stroking the idea of us being intimate. Imagining your warmth, your taste, your wetness. We were once together, in dreams before dreams, as nights I forced myself to stay sleep, forcefully closing open eyes. I never wanted to wake up, never wanted to lose the thought of us being intertwined, interlocked, as you locked your muscles around me. Choking me with every stroke. We would flip positions, flipping situations, taking turns, as we dominate one another. Explosion after explosion, as we light each other’s fuses. Choosing to submit to one another, I was always yours, before nights I gave myself to you. Wanting you, promising to do everything right, just to keep you. We once confessed, with out of breath words, that we would one day make us final. We would one day, write a book, no longer you and I, but we and us. Trusting everything we have never felt, to take a chance on something, we have never explored. We never allowed our sexuality to define our love, as we defined our love in us.

 

[sheawaitstruelove]

that's beautiful. it's almost exactly how I feel about my true love.

 

[PoeticTongue23228]

Thank you for the compliment, I appreciate it...

 

[twelveoone]

I liked

"Choking me with every stroke. "

expresses "new poems" so wonderfully

I am thinking about changing my name
to
FuckDaddy "G"
what do you think?

 

[HarryHill]

I liked

"Choking me with every stroke. "

expresses "new poems" so wonderfully

I am thinking about changing my name
to
FuckDaddy "G"
what do you think?

Works for me, Mr. G. Actualy it's not that bad, a step up from the usual fuck poem in NP. but that mono block. hard to read) keep writing PT find your voice and style.

 

[PoeticTongue23228]

Thank yall for the compliment, I appreciate it..

 

[Neonurotic]

Kinda reads like rap lyrics to me.

 

[twelveoone]

Works for me, Mr. G. Actualy it's not that bad, a step up from the usual fuck poem in NP. but that mono block. hard to read) keep writing PT find your voice and style.

you're right, and PT could be begin to see some things and work on it
Pressure builds
Pulsating heads
warmth, your taste, your wetness.
in dreams before dreams
intertwined, interlocked, as you locked i.e. inter,inter locked locked
there is an instinct for sound and repetition
I just get tired of the volcano motif, at least no popped top and cum all over the place