Pregnant lesbian

[Guest]

Could someone write a story about a pregnant woman who has a lesbian incounter? I'm very attracted to a pregnant woman and my dreams wont come true so I was wondering if someone could write something on here. Thanks!

 

[intriguess]

i actually enjoy the role playing boards more than sorting through stories, but i'll think about giving it a try.

 

[intriguess]

i wrote something up, do you want me to post it here? e-mail it to you? or submit to lit?

 

[intriguess]

here is what i have

I submitted it as well

When I first found out I was pregnant I was overjoyed, my husband and I celebrated by having wild amazing sex. The first few months were fine it was about month six that I noticed he was being protective and begging off. I knew he was working extra hard so he could get time off after I had baby but it was frustrating me to no end as my body was more sexually responsive than ever. I was talking with a close friend while we lounged in backyard sunning ourselves. I said it was so much easier with her being a lesbian and all. She was rubbing lotion into my back at the time and she said it had its rough points. I rolled over so I could look at her my tits naturally hard, and said the next time they would get sucked was if I breast-fed. Her fingers slide up to touch them and I flushed at how good it felt even through my swimsuit.

"I could change that," it was the barest hint of whisper and I shock my head, but her fingers persisted and she slowly worked my swimsuit down, my breasts popping out, her fingers working the entire breast. I couldn't help but moan and blushed as she squeezed one and liquid spurt a little out of my nipples. Before I could apologize, my husband had been weirded out by it; her mouth had lowered to my rosy tits and was sucking so gently, insistently. My body was responding, I couldn't understand, then her mouth took in the other one relieving a pressure I didn't even know was built up in my breasts. If she had been a man I would have done anything for more sucking, but she was my friend.

"Please stop," it's a weak protest at best as her lips cover mine in a kiss so soft that I was parting my lips to her.

"Let's go inside," I was relieved thinking she was going to stop but once inside she looked the patio door and began massaging my exposed breasts again. I was trying so hard to resist imagining my husband and only seeing him turned on. I give in as her fingers slide my swimsuit off. I had shaved my pussy ever since I started showing and I felt my legs try and close as her fingers slide down. It took very little coaxing and her looking me in the eye for my legs to part. She had me sit down on an amazingly soft looking beanbag chair. I sunk into material as her fingers parted my legs. I felt so warm and pampered as her tongue worked over my extended abdomen licking around the belly button. I whimpered trying to resist and failing miserable as her tongue worked down to my neglected wet cunt.

"How long has it been?"

"Three months or more, I haven't been able to bring myself to do it myself either."

"Poor neglected little pussy, let's cheer you up," she whispered.

I blushed even as I moaned her tongue knowing just what to do and how hard to do it. I didn't even realize I had moaned her name until the waves of pleasure rocking my body settled down. I was hooked and whispered, "More please."

So the next part would be written from the lesbian friend's point of view, hope this got you going, it sure turned me on.

 

[Ayaka]

I liked it

 

[intriguess]

thanks

 

[Polarbear II]

great story, and I would love to read the first part of it, where the husband is incredibly turned on by your pregnancy and the sex is more charged, more erotic, different in some ways. Nothing beats the steady, deep, healthy, full "glow" of a woman pregnant (yes, even when she recovers from morning sickness and is looking for those first few crackers of the day). A pregnant woman......so lovely and desirable. Can you write the first part?

 

[intriguess]

actually the posting of it on the site has gotten totally screwed up and merged with another thing I submitted and I'm getting a lot of flack for it, so I'm annoyed and having to deal with that.

This is first time I've gotten so much negative feedback from my stories and it's not encouraging. When I feel better I'll try and work back to the begining stages of her pregnancy and what happens next between these two.

 

[Polarbear II]

I am surprised you received such negative feedback. So many stories here are predictable and follow a worn script. Your story, as posted here, is a welcome break. Post more work and I imagine you will get much better feedback.....guess it just takes time and patience and a willing audience....cheers.....

 

[intriguess]

the story itself was posted wrong, that's why i got the negative feedback.

but another story I posted at same time called party of five, i got one guy razing on me for having the guy be so submissive, and another pick one sentence out and ask if I was drinking or if english were my first language.

Neither of these were really encouraging. makes me wonder if either of them has ever tried to write something themself. They remind me of critic who can only complain.

 

[Polarbear II]

the gulf between reading and writing is almost as wide as the gulf between reading well and writing well....almost. Submit something new....maybe the readers will start reading better

 

[intriguess]

thanks for the encouragement, i'm working on a continuation of party of five, called party of three and resubmitted the pregnant lesbian to be correct as well as additional chapters to the housewife. now it's up to the submission guys to say yeah or neah