Pound the Pony

BlackShanglan · Mar 28, 2005

No, it's not a new euphamism for masturbation. Rather, it's an invitation to all and sundry, especially those who might think I've gotten too big for my metaphorical britches, to come cut the equine ego down to size. I've got a story up on the story discussion circle forum - https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=324802 - and it's open for criticism. You are invited.

Shanglan

Samandiriel · Mar 28, 2005

I may have to gallop over and have a look see.

English Lady · Mar 28, 2005

Can I just pet and stroke and snuggle the pony instead?

Quiet_Cool · Mar 28, 2005

I saw the title and thought carson was finally giving you that public flogging the two of you have been teasing us with...

Q_C

BlackShanglan · Mar 28, 2005

English Lady said:
Can I just pet and stroke and snuggle the pony instead?

Oh, twist my tail.

*nuzzles* Always, dear one.

Quiet_Cool said:
I saw the title and thought carson was finally giving you that public flogging the two of you have been teasing us with...

*sigh* Some day ... until then I will just re-read this just and groan quietly to myself.

Shanglan

English Lady · Mar 28, 2005

*pets,strokes and snuggles Shanglan and waits on the public flogging.*

carsonshepherd · Mar 28, 2005

Dammit! Once again, I was tricked into thinking a thread was about masturbation. "Flog the pony" would be a good euphemism. Then there's the classic "baloney pony".

Seriously, everyone give Shanglan's story a read. It's worth it just for the enjoyment, even if you're not critiquing. Faboolous! :kiss:

Quiet_Cool · Mar 28, 2005

English Lady said:
*pets,strokes and snuggles Shanglan and waits on the public flogging.*

Floggings kick ass...

Q_C

English Lady · Mar 28, 2005

Quiet_Cool said:
Floggings kick ass...

Q_C

Kinda slaps it too

and makes it all warm and pink.... :devil:

Quiet_Cool · Mar 28, 2005

English Lady said:
Kinda slaps it too

and makes it all warm and pink....

Yep. Pink kicks ass too.

Q_C

English Lady · Mar 28, 2005

Quiet_Cool said:
Yep. Pink kicks ass too.

Q_C

Agreed!

(which smilie cums next?)

carsonshepherd · Mar 28, 2005

Horses don't wear britches.

BlackShanglan · Mar 28, 2005

carsonshepherd said:
Dammit! Once again, I was tricked into thinking a thread was about masturbation.

Shame on me. Deception is a terrible thing.

I've been a very bad horse.

Seriously, everyone give Shanglan's story a read. It's worth it just for the enjoyment, even if you're not critiquing. Faboolous!

Well, shucks. *digs in dust with hoof*

rikaaim · Mar 28, 2005

I'll give your story a good pounding when I get home Shanglan. I don't have the time now being at school, but I'll be sure to read it later and have some, hopefully, helpful comments and ideas ready to share. From what I've seen though you've already got a ton of support and ideas. I would hate to overwhelm.

carsonshepherd · Mar 28, 2005

BlackShanglan said:
Shame on me. Deception is a terrible thing.

I've been a very bad horse.

*flog flog*

BlackShanglan · Mar 28, 2005

rikaaim said:
I'll give your story a good pounding when I get home Shanglan. I don't have the time now being at school, but I'll be sure to read it later and have some, hopefully, helpful comments and ideas ready to share. From what I've seen though you've already got a ton of support and ideas. I would hate to overwhelm.

No fear of overwhelming - the more the merrier. I'd love to have your thoughts on it. I promise to remain soundly and steadfastly whelmed.

Many thanks, pasha -

Shanglan

rikaaim · Mar 28, 2005

carsonshepherd said:
*flog flog*

Sure, you always flog the well defined stud. And that's never me for some reason.

Quiet_Cool · Mar 28, 2005

rikaaim said:
Sure, you always flog the well defined stud. And that's never me for some reason.

Don't tak eit personal, Rika. I don't get flogged either.

I think he's just partial to four-legged playmates.

Q_C

English Lady · Mar 28, 2005

Quiet_Cool said:
Don't tak eit personal, Rika. I don't get flogged either.

I think he's just partial to four-legged playmates.

Q_C

Do you need flogging?

*EL perks up*

Colleen Thomas · Mar 28, 2005

i critique at the SDC sometimes, but honestly, I doubt I can say much. I leave technical critique to those who know something of it and focus on story, plot, internal consistancy, things I feel qualified to comment on. In your case Shang, I have no doubt there is little to be said int hsoe realms.

BlackShanglan · Mar 28, 2005

Quiet_Cool said:
I think he's just partial to four-legged playmates.

Not that there's anything wrong with that ...

moonlight elf · Mar 29, 2005

Shang,

Just read your piece. I have only 3 words to say .....

I LOVED IT!!!!

(This is a work that I would recommend to others.)

yui · Mar 29, 2005

The title of the thread just made me quiver just a little.

I will check out your SDC piece, Shanglan, but I'm likely to fluff out and just tell you how pretty and smart I think you are.

BlackShanglan · Mar 29, 2005

Thanks very much, Moonlight Elf

Please do feel free to shred it, though - it's a story I rather like in its entirety, and I want it to really shine when it finally enters into the wide world.

Shanglan

BlackShanglan · Mar 29, 2005

yui said:
The title of the thread just made me quiver just a little.

I will check out your SDC piece, Shanglan, but I'm likely to fluff out and just tell you how pretty and smart I think you are.

God forbid

*nuzzle*

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