zeitgeist_the_clown
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Hey, all.
I submitted my first story to Literotica the other day, and it apparently didn't suck so much that it was rejected outright, because it's up on the site now. (Woo! Yay me!)
I'd like a little feedback from you -- the fine upstanding citizens of the Literotica Discussion Boards.
The story is entitled "Love Letter", and is at: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=405998
Thanks in advance for your time and effort.
Zeitgeist the Clown
P.S.: My participation in this thread will probably lag a bit, as I don't have internet access of my own. So if I don't respond to your thoughts on my story in a day or two, I'm not being rude, I just haven't managed to borrow anyone's computer again since posting.
I submitted my first story to Literotica the other day, and it apparently didn't suck so much that it was rejected outright, because it's up on the site now. (Woo! Yay me!)
I'd like a little feedback from you -- the fine upstanding citizens of the Literotica Discussion Boards.
The story is entitled "Love Letter", and is at: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=405998
Thanks in advance for your time and effort.
Zeitgeist the Clown
P.S.: My participation in this thread will probably lag a bit, as I don't have internet access of my own. So if I don't respond to your thoughts on my story in a day or two, I'm not being rude, I just haven't managed to borrow anyone's computer again since posting.
